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Fielding time
Upon air Rose and Blue
set within the night
on a field lay me and You
The kiss of the wind
blowing restless
as caffeine veins
seeking needles
bleed the moment
where I need only
pinpricks
of light that burst inside
that touch of You
leaves of trees rustle
acknowledging precipice
if our time is hindered
so the clock slows
with each pass
as it is our hands
that cast sacred sands
within our field
held tight embodied
under our coloured sky
my nose big and red
says
a Brassy tack lives it up
upon the grass
whereas always here
it is high and fine
we the tumbled two
breathing deep
the depths
Our painted view
set within the night
on a field lay me and You
The kiss of the wind
blowing restless
as caffeine veins
seeking needles
bleed the moment
where I need only
pinpricks
of light that burst inside
that touch of You
leaves of trees rustle
acknowledging precipice
if our time is hindered
so the clock slows
with each pass
as it is our hands
that cast sacred sands
within our field
held tight embodied
under our coloured sky
my nose big and red
says
a Brassy tack lives it up
upon the grass
whereas always here
it is high and fine
we the tumbled two
breathing deep
the depths
Our painted view
Published 5th Jul 2013
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5th Jul 2013 7:48am
....and the view is captivating too! I see it from my cyber window! ;)
Very nice Soul! Hope you had an awesome 4th of July! Xo
Very nice Soul! Hope you had an awesome 4th of July! Xo
5th Jul 2013 7:51am
5th Jul 2013 8:52am
5th Jul 2013 9:26am
Anonymous
5th Jul 2013 10:41am
Nice vivid flow soul it did swirl
strider
strider
5th Jul 2013 10:09pm
5th Jul 2013 11:14am
Beautiful imagery, a vivid vision, enjoyed much. Good read Soul. Thanks for sharing the colours and merrymaking...
5th Jul 2013 10:11pm
Anonymous
5th Jul 2013 12:53pm
This is like a cloud with a silver or golden lining, it passes so swiftly and makes images come back of memories dear somehow....
Greatly enjoyed this write, Soul!
Greatly enjoyed this write, Soul!
5th Jul 2013 10:14pm
Honoured and humbled By Your words Dear Queen-I'm glad You enjoyed it:)
5th Jul 2013 5:27pm
Wow Soul this is a gem of a write full of vivid imagery and so very lovely :) peace Crim
5th Jul 2013 10:16pm
6th Jul 2013 2:57pm
A vibrant and vivid creation my friend, its always a pleasure to read your work!
Red
Red
11th Jul 2013 2:11pm
11th Jul 2013 6:53pm
Magical tempo, flow, and imagery.
I love the pictures you create with this :)
I love the pictures you create with this :)
12th Jul 2013 4:50am
Thank You Dear Scribbler-always!!!
and JUST WHERE have Your fine writes been hiding Young Lady...I am in much withdrawal...
and JUST WHERE have Your fine writes been hiding Young Lady...I am in much withdrawal...
