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Who I am...
I can't help what I do.
It's just who I am, I don't know how to stop.
If you don't like that then you better take off.
I am what I am, I'm who I am.
That won't change, not for even you darlin'.
I can't be them, I will never be and I don't wanna be.
Can't change my ways, I'm stuck in a routine and I love it.
If you can't deal with my anger or frustration,
Then you better find someone else.
I'm impatient, confused, can't wait to be six feet under.
That's just me, never said you had to deal with it.
Just don't try change me because it doesn't work.
That's why the last girl got kicked to the curve.
You said you loved me for who I am, you lied.
If you did, you wouldn't be trying to change me.
This is who I am, I can't back down.
This is how things are going to stay.
There's a monster inside of my head and you better like it.
If not, you know where the door is.
..::-MasterDesignOfAFake-::..
It's just who I am, I don't know how to stop.
If you don't like that then you better take off.
I am what I am, I'm who I am.
That won't change, not for even you darlin'.
I can't be them, I will never be and I don't wanna be.
Can't change my ways, I'm stuck in a routine and I love it.
If you can't deal with my anger or frustration,
Then you better find someone else.
I'm impatient, confused, can't wait to be six feet under.
That's just me, never said you had to deal with it.
Just don't try change me because it doesn't work.
That's why the last girl got kicked to the curve.
You said you loved me for who I am, you lied.
If you did, you wouldn't be trying to change me.
This is who I am, I can't back down.
This is how things are going to stay.
There's a monster inside of my head and you better like it.
If not, you know where the door is.
..::-MasterDesignOfAFake-::..
Published 27th Nov 2010
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29th Jan 2011 1:55am
It's generally 'curb' rather than 'curve' and there were full-stops where there needn't be but I like the blunt topic and the use of 'darlin'', I also like the last line but it needs to read 'There is a monster inside my head and you better like it, if not, you know where the door is.' You don't need to put a full stop at every breather, just let it flow. Other than that this was okay.
4th Feb 2011 5:32am
dats wat im friggin talkin bout...excattly how i see it...!!...awsomeness duuuude!
15th Apr 2011 4:36pm
Amazing. Somethings that you feel are just hard to say... I think that you nailed it!
8th Jan 2012 10:29pm
You sound like my boyfriend...I don't know what it is but I think its hot!!! This is great stuff, by the way.;)
