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~Rain~
I want it to pour,
rain down on me,
wash everything
away,
I need peaceful,
calm,
softly hitting my
skin then sliding
off,
touching my lips,
droplets roll
into my mouth,
I love the rain,
the storm,
nothing between
the rain and I,
like sweet music
of my life,
I'm awakened,
alive
rain down on me,
wash everything
away,
I need peaceful,
calm,
softly hitting my
skin then sliding
off,
touching my lips,
droplets roll
into my mouth,
I love the rain,
the storm,
nothing between
the rain and I,
like sweet music
of my life,
I'm awakened,
alive
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Re: ~Rain~
1st Jul 2013 2:38am
rain revives you the most sometimes...I love your quick description and wording...nice one...
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Anonymous
1st Jul 2013 2:53am
Well what a coincidence, I just wrote a rain poem too :P
Yours is great.
Yours is great.
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1st Jul 2013 3:16am
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Anonymous
1st Jul 2013 2:57am
I really liked this!
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1st Jul 2013 3:17am
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1st Jul 2013 3:42am
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Anonymous
1st Jul 2013 3:42am
great job tl...strider
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Anonymous
1st Jul 2013 3:46am
Beautiful, peaceful image :) I could use some cooling rain right now. Thank you for the chance to at least ponder the wet stuff ;)
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Anonymous
1st Jul 2013 3:56am
My pleasure :)
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1st Jul 2013 10:04am
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1st Jul 2013 6:02am
This is beautiful ... Dad called it God's shower ... this reminded me why
LSP
LSP
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1st Jul 2013 10:05am
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1st Jul 2013 2:30pm
Well then u need to be here where I am! lol it's been raining
now for two days n the next 4 will be the same rain rain rain... I'm not a big fan but I know it's necessary... I like the personal pleasure it brings u though lol
now for two days n the next 4 will be the same rain rain rain... I'm not a big fan but I know it's necessary... I like the personal pleasure it brings u though lol
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3rd Jul 2013 4:33am
I can picture you in that rain storm, enjoying the power of it, wet & radiant...
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3rd Jul 2013 5:13am