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SUMMER WAVES (haiku)
summer ocean waves--
gently caressing the shores
just like your kisses...
gently caressing the shores
just like your kisses...
Published 30th Jun 2013
| Edited 1st Jul 2013
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1st Jul 2013 1:47am
2nd Jul 2013 3:51pm
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1st Jul 2013 1:48am
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2nd Jul 2013 3:55pm
It was actually a series of haiku which I decided to break down into bits and pieces for now because I haven't come out yet with an appropriate ending.
But like you said MadameLavender, so much said already with just a few words. I guess sometimes it's better left that way!
Thank you so much for the read and wonderful comment.
But like you said MadameLavender, so much said already with just a few words. I guess sometimes it's better left that way!
Thank you so much for the read and wonderful comment.
1st Jul 2013 6:00am
2nd Jul 2013 3:58pm
I just miss the tranquility of the place I used to hang-out when I was a teen-ager. I wish I knew how to write poems back then!
Thank you my dear friend, Anita...
Thank you my dear friend, Anita...
1st Jul 2013 3:02pm
2nd Jul 2013 3:59pm
Thank you so much for the lovely comment Red! I really appreciate your presence all the time...
1st Jul 2013 11:30pm
2nd Jul 2013 4:00pm
2nd Jul 2013 10:52am
2nd Jul 2013 4:02pm
I'm glad you feel that way Mate...aren't we all romantic,the poets that we are?
Thanks for reading.
Thanks for reading.
