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Carpet ideas
I've lost my mind
on a train with
my friends while
buzzing on ecstasy.
I've been to seedy Jamaican clubs
and drunk moonshine
in the heart of london.
I've caught trams with
fashion designers,
writers, artists,
producers and
lovers.
I've caught buses
with pretty girls
on bright sunny days.
But it comes at no surprise
that I'm sitting on my floor
writing about you.
on a train with
my friends while
buzzing on ecstasy.
I've been to seedy Jamaican clubs
and drunk moonshine
in the heart of london.
I've caught trams with
fashion designers,
writers, artists,
producers and
lovers.
I've caught buses
with pretty girls
on bright sunny days.
But it comes at no surprise
that I'm sitting on my floor
writing about you.
Published 30th Jun 2013
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30th Jun 2013 5:13pm
That ending explodes it all man...I know that feeling...love her dont you? :-) Sick write man...
13th Jul 2013 3:17pm
21st Sep 2013 11:34pm
9th Jan 2014 6:29am
you lover her which is good now direct to "the moonshine in the heart of London", my girl waits for me there, simple/poignant poem (affecting but unaffected)kudos
