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And Vanilla is now Neapolitan
Mild is Wild
Plain is insane
And Vanilla is now Neapolitan.
A few ropes here and there
is all thats needed to make me wild
Because for me the ties that bind
opens up my boxed passions,
The wonderful pandora in bondage
is bound to become my paradise.
Forget ultraviolence and extremism
That force the boundaries too far
pushing the envelope where the message fades and falters.
When all I need is a few changes
And therein I will blow your mind
If only you'll change your world
to a more constricted one.
A little light bondage goes a long way
for my darker desires.
Talk with your eyes for the gags on
Move with your lips for the ropes are on
Wear a collar to flip my switch.
Just a minor deviance makes it a fetish
But the love will be as true as any other.
Plain is insane
And Vanilla is now Neapolitan.
A few ropes here and there
is all thats needed to make me wild
Because for me the ties that bind
opens up my boxed passions,
The wonderful pandora in bondage
is bound to become my paradise.
Forget ultraviolence and extremism
That force the boundaries too far
pushing the envelope where the message fades and falters.
When all I need is a few changes
And therein I will blow your mind
If only you'll change your world
to a more constricted one.
A little light bondage goes a long way
for my darker desires.
Talk with your eyes for the gags on
Move with your lips for the ropes are on
Wear a collar to flip my switch.
Just a minor deviance makes it a fetish
But the love will be as true as any other.
Published 27th Jun 2013
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27th Jun 2013 1:58pm
You only can carry a message so sensitive as this one blending beautifully with your humor. Love you my lord!
27th Jun 2013 11:05pm
Oh not you too, plenty of men love me but can I get a nod from the rest, why no. Perhaps my next sarcastic poem then.
A sensitive poem is best spoken from the heart and if others can see that then the heart speaks true.
A sensitive poem is best spoken from the heart and if others can see that then the heart speaks true.
Anonymous
27th Jun 2013 8:57pm
"The wonderful pandora in bondage" is a beautiful image. It's a beautiful metaphor for fantasy, the unknown, the untouched.
"Just a minor deviance makes it a fetish
But the love will be as true as any other."
Some lovely sentiment here. I like this piece, I guess it appeals to my interests.
Thank you for the read.
"Just a minor deviance makes it a fetish
But the love will be as true as any other."
Some lovely sentiment here. I like this piece, I guess it appeals to my interests.
Thank you for the read.
27th Jun 2013 11:10pm
I am glad you liked the image there, it just sounded right in my head. Though that pandora would capture my attention and be able to box it up.
Just like? Perhaps harder would be better then, said the Estate Agent to the Third little Pig. Does this constitute a fetish then or does the sentimentality in this poem make it more less harder poem?
Just like? Perhaps harder would be better then, said the Estate Agent to the Third little Pig. Does this constitute a fetish then or does the sentimentality in this poem make it more less harder poem?
Anonymous
28th Jun 2013 9:03am
Sentimentality does not make it any less of a thorough poem. A lot of people have this idea that fetish is emotionless, but a great deal of energy is aroused from the soul to enjoy that particular obsession.
On re reading it - there's not really a particular fetish listed here. This is more about lust than an obsession.
On re reading it - there's not really a particular fetish listed here. This is more about lust than an obsession.
30th Jun 2013 00:07am
I always had the idea that fetish was intense emotion, or rather the same emotion apparent in 'vanilla' just expressed in a different area.
I suppose slightly deviant vanilla is still vanilla and therefore lust not fetish and obsession.
I suppose slightly deviant vanilla is still vanilla and therefore lust not fetish and obsession.
30th Jun 2013 10:50am
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24th Jul 2013 00:09am
Shocked? Now thats confusing. Not being 'hard' enough as others seem to be is something i can understand, but being 'shocking'? Please enlighten me.
25th Aug 2016 11:57pm
There is metamorphic meta-magic in such metaphors. Though I do not bat for the other team beyond a playful indulgence to make the game good for everyone.
