Anarchia

Opheliac.
Not sure it'll help, but sometimes I'll throw an 'and at the start of the first line to see how that'll sound or read:

and you'll bring me to beginnings
not necessarily new
not necessarily pleasant


Something to ponder on anyway,  I s'pose with that change of word it brings the poem into.more of a prediction than a statement.

good stuff here missus as per, shine like an arc light :)

that's a good idea Craic.
thanks for your support :)

Perhaps removing the fullstop after 'beginnings' would make it flow differently? I don't know, but I enjoyed it as it stands anyway

i shall give it a thought.
thankyou Dartford

Lovely, O.

Thank you LA :)

the "you" focus pouring on strong, smells of love , though me here Ophie! cos, its only that which causes any motion, call it a chaos or a breeze or pain. the title reflects this in manifolds..just feeling a panacea for idle loveless state. your words causes some sorta revelation within me as ever. keep writing.

you read me too well Uma :)
thank you!

short and powerful! loved this!

thank you Refined Poet :)

the "you" in bringing new beginnings implies what? I assumed it was a man....but then I am reading things into your poetry....Maybe the other way of seeing it is to see that the person who brings new beginnings to you are part of a larger sphere of events....cause and effect are only probabilities
my 2 cents

imaginative interpretation there Kitty.
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