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Suicide
It feels good to shoot down your pride
Jealousy from broken hope can no longer hide
Nights filled with tears and fears
Due to hate
All them emotions
Stirring up a potion
But today is the day of release
I'm killing that part of myself
Releasing my spirit out its cell
It all starts with Truth
And ends in embracing
The ones we done wrong
Death to All Negative energy I hold inwardly
Jealousy from broken hope can no longer hide
Nights filled with tears and fears
Due to hate
All them emotions
Stirring up a potion
But today is the day of release
I'm killing that part of myself
Releasing my spirit out its cell
It all starts with Truth
And ends in embracing
The ones we done wrong
Death to All Negative energy I hold inwardly
Published 15th Jun 2013
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15th Jun 2013 11:17pm
15th Jun 2013 11:22pm
Now that I think of it That is why your angel poem resonated with me so much .
16th Jun 2013 1:21am
Those were great and insightful words of healing, Miss HottNess.
Thinking and hoping of you that it works-out.
Thinking and hoping of you that it works-out.
Anonymous
16th Jun 2013 11:43pm
Welcome to DUP New Member
Do not even think of suicide....
Your wording however sounds more like
a purge of all negative emotions
Well penned
Write on!
Peace
Kitty
Do not even think of suicide....
Your wording however sounds more like
a purge of all negative emotions
Well penned
Write on!
Peace
Kitty
I definitely have to thank you for stopping by. Especially after reading your poem on recognizing comments :)
No not a suicide
But more like killing that ugly side before she consumed my whole being
No not a suicide
But more like killing that ugly side before she consumed my whole being
Anonymous
17th Jun 2013 6:15pm
Now this is the first time I've ever condoned a suicide....i like the play on words...very original concept...very nice Hottness
28th Jun 2013 9:40pm
Unusual, yet rather calming theme... I don't like that I like it. But I like it. Good job. I tend to write on the darker, less pleasant side of matters.
7th Jul 2013 8:49pm
Have to kill that negative within otherwise it may just kill you. Very interesting way of explaining the need to purge.
