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We Bark Up Trees
Casually we throw words about
dancing about the canvas
Careful
must be cryptic in detail
Is lust the correct word?
Or does desire, better convey what I feel?
Better trash this shit... god-awful write.
Looking at you
how my heart quickens
Inhaling your scent..
oh how I Howl, read, on the prowl
Filled with deep craving
thirsting, this primal urge
Only you.. can sate this hunger
So we bark up trees you see
sometimes, we find a tree to our liking.
dancing about the canvas
Careful
must be cryptic in detail
Is lust the correct word?
Or does desire, better convey what I feel?
Better trash this shit... god-awful write.
Looking at you
how my heart quickens
Inhaling your scent..
oh how I Howl, read, on the prowl
Filled with deep craving
thirsting, this primal urge
Only you.. can sate this hunger
So we bark up trees you see
sometimes, we find a tree to our liking.
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Re: We Bark Up Trees
15th Jun 2013 5:14pm
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15th Jun 2013 7:44pm
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16th Jun 2013 11:11am
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Anonymous
15th Jun 2013 9:31pm
Very creative, your wording...has a cute
feel, yet a longing...
feel, yet a longing...
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16th Jun 2013 11:15am
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Anonymous
16th Jun 2013 8:19am
nice work, Carpe-sometimes we do bark up the right tree! Key is to keep barking til it's right, I guess. Filled with deep sentiment :-)
Miki
Miki
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16th Jun 2013 11:19am
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Anonymous
16th Jun 2013 5:18pm
I like Honeysuckle on Elm Noctem!
Nice write....Strider
Nice write....Strider
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16th Jun 2013 6:58pm