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'Dream Nesting'
I cry out
with an urging to taste her lips
a beauty so rare, and tender
to savor it
I drink her in small sips
my goodness, I get
heady from her splendor
pressed closely to me
breastbone, to chestbone
as I close my eyes
I'm lost inside her world
we dance
our lover's dance
it's ike we're all alone
she makes me dream
of possiblities as we twirl
drunk past
the legal limit, the law allows
yet, it's only her mental elixir
possessing me...
far gone,
a poor soul enriched
by a love endowed
as I think, why awaken?
when dreams of her set me free...
with an urging to taste her lips
a beauty so rare, and tender
to savor it
I drink her in small sips
my goodness, I get
heady from her splendor
pressed closely to me
breastbone, to chestbone
as I close my eyes
I'm lost inside her world
we dance
our lover's dance
it's ike we're all alone
she makes me dream
of possiblities as we twirl
drunk past
the legal limit, the law allows
yet, it's only her mental elixir
possessing me...
far gone,
a poor soul enriched
by a love endowed
as I think, why awaken?
when dreams of her set me free...
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Re: 'Dream Nesting'
12th Jun 2013 12:10pm
"drunk past
the legal limit, the law allows
yet, it's only her mental elixir
possessing me..."<--I so love that!
I love how you tease words! :)
Pen On~
the legal limit, the law allows
yet, it's only her mental elixir
possessing me..."<--I so love that!
I love how you tease words! :)
Pen On~
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re: Re: 'Dream Nesting'
12th Jun 2013 12:41pm
Aaaawww hope u know how u make me smile so much lol
Thank u my sweet one! Appreciate u tons! :)
Thank u my sweet one! Appreciate u tons! :)
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Anonymous
12th Jun 2013 12:13pm
I love the magical feel in this..kinda free and airy but with depths. Nice work
why wake up from such dreams, indeed?
2nd line sounds better as "with a(n) urging"
but it's awesome
why wake up from such dreams, indeed?
2nd line sounds better as "with a(n) urging"
but it's awesome
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re: Re: 'Dream Nesting'
12th Jun 2013 12:42pm
Oh heck yea, I 'thought' an yet typed a lol nice catch lady! lol
I'm happy you enjoyed this n truly grateful for the support as well :)
I'm happy you enjoyed this n truly grateful for the support as well :)
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12th Jun 2013 12:48pm
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12th Jun 2013 12:52pm
Aaaawww my precious one, I thank you! muah! U sweet sweet woman I appreciate you so much :)
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Anonymous
12th Jun 2013 12:53pm
Drunk on each other's desire, the best liquor there is. A brilliant piece.
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12th Jun 2013 12:54pm
Lol yup yup can't think of anything better myself! lol
Thanks a ton dude, will return the favor soon :)
Thanks a ton dude, will return the favor soon :)
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12th Jun 2013 1:00pm
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12th Jun 2013 1:40pm
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12th Jun 2013 3:31pm
thank you, happy you enjoyed n I'm truly appreciative
of ur sweet support :)
of ur sweet support :)
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12th Jun 2013 2:27pm
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12th Jun 2013 3:06pm
This is just such a delight to read. How beautiful are the throws of love and passion when it all fits perfectly. I absolutely loved this piece Syn
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12th Jun 2013 3:34pm
Thank you sweetheart, I appreciate your wonderful comment n thoughts, happy you liked my effort :)
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Anonymous
12th Jun 2013 5:17pm
This, I think, is the lovliest of your poems that I have read yet. Sweetly written, cher.
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12th Jun 2013 5:36pm
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12th Jun 2013 5:53pm
I do!?!? Well if u r too then hop on in!! I got more room! lol
Thank u sweetie ur Da best! :)
Thank u sweetie ur Da best! :)
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Anonymous
12th Jun 2013 8:44pm
Beautiful dream, of the best kind, Poetikmind. Wonderful expression & greatly inked. :)
Carlene
Carlene
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