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Nebula
I hear Her
cries
in the night
Her sighs
to the day
as wolfs howl
innocent pains
Children
of the mountain
mist
among the rain
deepened
creeping in
of the quiet
throws
and
blankets
to
our countryside
We sprawl
out
sifting
Our share
in time
stars
they keep
falling
as we
sweep up
dust
putting
to palms
the two of us
within the dark
we strike a match
and to that light
both are half
holding the other
steadfast
Intact
make no mistake
A Thornbird
on a wave
dives
into the sun
mirrored
in set
of everyone
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=9dJ-LYN6dqM
cries
in the night
Her sighs
to the day
as wolfs howl
innocent pains
Children
of the mountain
mist
among the rain
deepened
creeping in
of the quiet
throws
and
blankets
to
our countryside
We sprawl
out
sifting
Our share
in time
stars
they keep
falling
as we
sweep up
dust
putting
to palms
the two of us
within the dark
we strike a match
and to that light
both are half
holding the other
steadfast
Intact
make no mistake
A Thornbird
on a wave
dives
into the sun
mirrored
in set
of everyone
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=9dJ-LYN6dqM
Published 8th Jun 2013
| Edited 10th Jun 2013
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Anonymous
8th Jun 2013 9:42am
cleverly composed and beautiful..you have improved in the little time you've been here-you had it always but it's developing nicely! :-)
9th Jun 2013 4:52am
8th Jun 2013 12:06pm
9th Jun 2013 4:53am
This reminds me of what one the astronauts in the late 60ies said about about going to the moon, "the trip reminded me of just how insignificant we are in terms of the size of everything created".
9th Jun 2013 4:54am
9th Jun 2013 8:05am
oh I was so trying to tie my words into John Mayer's "Gravity", but I just couldn't wrap my head around a connection. (hint, hint for a new write!)
8th Jun 2013 7:21pm
9th Jun 2013 4:56am
I could truly live in a bakery I think---thank You for the kind words Tony!!!
Anonymous
8th Jun 2013 9:23pm
Nebula, the darkest star, oh how to entwine with the dark and just float into it....
I did when I read your poem!
Wonderful write, Soul
I did when I read your poem!
Wonderful write, Soul
9th Jun 2013 4:58am
8th Jun 2013 10:02pm
9th Jun 2013 4:59am
Why yes I did comment upon Your gifted write-Beautiful it was!!!
;) Thank You Dear Scribbler-too kind!!!
;) Thank You Dear Scribbler-too kind!!!
9th Jun 2013 2:11am
9th Jun 2013 4:51am
Anonymous
9th Jun 2013 10:21am
Great flow your talent grows soul!
10th Jun 2013 00:15am
9th Jun 2013 11:41am
10th Jun 2013 00:16am
13th Jun 2013 3:05am
wow
great write
love this:
and to that light
both are half
holding the other
steadfast
Intact
great write
love this:
and to that light
both are half
holding the other
steadfast
Intact
13th Jun 2013 4:22pm
