Red's Fever

A very sensual delight my dear... Great work.

Magda thank you for reading my piece, I am happy you enjoyed it.:-)

Red

awesome work

Thank you! Happy you liked it!

Red

Omfg yea FEVER is right!! My temp. Just rose about 100 degrees! So I guess I'm incinerated!! lol wow, truly, epically hot n masterfully crafted!! Got me yearning for a burning lady! lol

Hahaha baby you alright??? Need some help??? Lol Thank you honey I cannot tell how it thrills me that you enjoyed it so much!

Red

Hot read red...!

That's a tongue twister for ya! Lol thanks strider!

Red

nice one :-) fever indeed! write on red

There is no pill for this one Miki lol Thanks for stopping by.


Red

Lush, sensual words and phrases under tight control within a highly intelligent overall framework. That is a great achievement.

I am happy that the "tight control" was evident, it was important to me keep continuity and fluidity throughout. Thank you the wonderful comment.

Red

Wow...fever indeed Red, my dear...!!

Hahah thank you Grace Yeah i was burning up on this one. lol

Red

Dammmn it's hottt in heeere!!! :)
Quite the burning read Dear Red-Excellent Ink!!!

Thank you Soul, need some water sweets? lol


Red

Damn Red...wow..I'm write just like you when I grow up lol!!! Beautiful!!

Thank you Mr. Moretti, I am honored you feel my style of writing is something to aspire to. Thanks for stopping by glad you liked it.

Red

Way to go Red, nice sensuality. I love the woven rhymes ...

Thank you, thank you I appreciate that Mark nice to see your comment. :-)  
 
Red

😘 perfect and amazing. I love your work thank you for sharing.