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5th Jun 2013 1:14pm
Slick as a sheet of ice n smooth like satin
This rocks lady! Felt music playing in my head as I read it! :)
This rocks lady! Felt music playing in my head as I read it! :)
5th Jun 2013 1:21pm
LOl (slightly blushing)Thank you Poe, I love your comment, you are too kind!
Red
Red
5th Jun 2013 1:42pm
5th Jun 2013 2:04pm
HAHAhahaah naughty turtle I KNEW YOU would come for this one! Great bait for fishing turtles! hahahaah
Love ya man, hope you are well, thanks for the comment!
Red
Love ya man, hope you are well, thanks for the comment!
Red
Anonymous
5th Jun 2013 3:43pm
Great flowing write Red...well done!
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5th Jun 2013 4:36pm
The power of the written word should never be underestimated. Here you give a wonderful reason why. Always reassuring to find creativity at it's best especially when it doesn't come at the expense of others.
5th Jun 2013 4:44pm
Thank you Jazzy for the praise I appreciate it! I try to bring you guys the best of me and I agree there is no need take aim at others to create a good piece.
Red
Red
5th Jun 2013 4:50pm
I love my stilettos! I'm 5ft 4" too :) Nicely penned and expressed dear, love the pic to go with it.
5th Jun 2013 6:16pm
5th Jun 2013 5:04pm
I love the way yo set up the mood from sipping wine in red stilettos leading to a subtle hint of love-making in the end!
So calculated and well crafted!
So calculated and well crafted!
5th Jun 2013 6:18pm
You caught that did you? How astute, a little picant to spice things up! lol Thank you Victor for stopping by to read this piece.
Red
Red
Anonymous
5th Jun 2013 7:16pm
damn.... . you are so sexy when you're handling your grown woman business..... work them stilettos Red..haha..love it!
5th Jun 2013 7:24pm
Ha! I love it, I love it, what a fun comment!lol
Thank you Naajir, I love to see my readers enjoying my pieces its great motivation! And Naajir you are fantastic for gal's ego!lol :-)
Red
Thank you Naajir, I love to see my readers enjoying my pieces its great motivation! And Naajir you are fantastic for gal's ego!lol :-)
Red
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Anonymous
6th Jun 2013 9:09am
This is great, nice work Red :-)
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Hahah yeah its like my Kevlar vest when I put them on I mean business! Thank you Grace!
Red
Red
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Anonymous
9th Jun 2013 00:25am
Cool poem, writing about feeling beautiful, wearing beautiful things, and being beautiful. Ya can't go wrong!
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