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Fetish
Feeling the rush of your body as my tongue begins its assault against the tenderness and sensitivity of your clit, growing
Erect, the edification of shared pleasures, synergistic passions revealed
Tingling so electrically. I watch your abs tighten as the stimulation heightens..........your body slowly beginning to stiffen and move as the arousal grows...........
I feel your burning desires as I lick, suck.........taste your feminine flesh. The warm, creamy rains begin to increase their flow as your body thrashes, your legs constrict and wrap themselves around my back, my shoulders.............
So damned sensual, so damned sexy and utterly surreal. Is that simply the way two lovers feel when one desires to give his fetish pleasure to the other, unselfishly? Longing for her to cum so strongly to me..........tongue spliting her wet lips, lanquid thrusting deeply inside her gasping, biting hole, connected implicitly to her soul. I take it all, as
Her body starts to climb the wall, the atmosphere echoes love's lustful call. I am now caught amidst her firm grasp. Wildly, she thrashes; so out of control. Toes curled tightly............thrusting, gyrating, buckling like a wild Mustang taken on that very first ride. Can I break her strong animal willfulness with my own? My head and my hands pressed tightly between her thighs until the “Rains” slowly subsides. My deepest desire I share with you......
"..........sometimes when we touch
The honesty's too much
And I have to close my eyes and hide
I wanna hold you till I die
Till we both break down and cry
I wanna hold you till the fear in me subsides....."
Song Credit ("Sometimes When We Touch", by Dan Hill)
Published 29th May 2013
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29th May 2013 11:02pm
29th May 2013 11:21pm
Sometimes the word fetish takes on a meaning relating to something beyond ordinary. In this poem you make it seem a natural component of loving one's mate. DU should be thanking you for I will be directing a few people to read your eloquent words here!
Thanks for coming up with this Bro.
Please excuse me if I missed any song references in this one!
Thanks for coming up with this Bro.
Please excuse me if I missed any song references in this one!
29th May 2013 11:34pm
Your Pen showed Out in this ink! Whew! :)
You were flowing across the stage with seduction, making eye contact with each fan/reader out in the audience. You made them feel like your words were made for them individually!
Bravo! Encore! More please...... we love your Fetish! Xoxo
You were flowing across the stage with seduction, making eye contact with each fan/reader out in the audience. You made them feel like your words were made for them individually!
Bravo! Encore! More please...... we love your Fetish! Xoxo
".........You were flowing across the stage with seduction, making eye contact with each fan/reader out in the audience. You made them feel like your words were made for them individually!......"
Hmmmmmm...... ; ) Thank You
Hmmmmmm...... ; ) Thank You
29th May 2013 11:56pm
Your ink is so sensual and visual, to the point that I feel each line, makes my body react.
30th May 2013 00:07am
".....Is that simply the way two lovers feel when one desires to give his fetish pleasure to the other, unselfishly.......?"
Thank You for your reaction to my ink...... : )
Thank You for your reaction to my ink...... : )
Anonymous
- Edited 30th May 2013 1:05am
30th May 2013 1:04am
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30th May 2013 1:25am
Brother Gabriel,
I think most men today have a penchant tasting our women there......if we don't, lord knows we should LOL
Tis my favorite part of the Art Of Making Love : )
I think most men today have a penchant tasting our women there......if we don't, lord knows we should LOL
Tis my favorite part of the Art Of Making Love : )
Anonymous
30th May 2013 1:53am
I keep trying to think of something to say about this poem. But all I come up with are indrawn breaths and sighs.
I think that means you've done very well...
I think that means you've done very well...
30th May 2013 2:14am
Si vous pouvez me sentir manger ta chatte, ma mission est accomplie >:-p~~~
30th May 2013 2:33am
30th May 2013 4:17am
30th May 2013 3:59am
Wow MrM, chills all over my body... Got my own toes curling with this ink.
Loving the fetish;)
Loving the fetish;)
30th May 2013 4:19am
Mmmmm Lady De, truly *my* favorite Fetish. Just the thought places me in a trance.......
Anonymous
30th May 2013 7:16pm
MrM,
I think you have hit the bulls-eye with this 'fetish'! If it's not everyones favorite....well, it should be!!! Smooth my brother, very smooth...and biting! ; )
tornado
I think you have hit the bulls-eye with this 'fetish'! If it's not everyones favorite....well, it should be!!! Smooth my brother, very smooth...and biting! ; )
tornado
Anonymous
- Edited 6th Mar 2019 10:45pm
30th May 2013 11:15pm
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31st May 2013 6:16pm
"......God bless the left breast, and God bless the left breast" (an excerpt from "Do the Right Thing" as Spike Lee cools off a hot Rosie Perez with Ice Cubes upon stiff nippled breast) : )
btw....I really love the new avatar. The "warmth" inside those jeans. Mmmmmmmmm......
btw....I really love the new avatar. The "warmth" inside those jeans. Mmmmmmmmm......
31st May 2013 2:31am
the intensity..the graphic nature of it all...I see you make it your business to say exactly what's on your mind..taking your time...yes..this is definitely that man/woman type ish...and I'm a fan..splendid presentation...and this.."..........sometimes when we touch
The honesty's too much
And I have to close my eyes and hide
I wanna hold you till I die
Till we both break down and cry
I wanna hold you till the fear in me subsides....."..oh yeah..I totally relate...
The honesty's too much
And I have to close my eyes and hide
I wanna hold you till I die
Till we both break down and cry
I wanna hold you till the fear in me subsides....."..oh yeah..I totally relate...
31st May 2013 6:17pm
31st May 2013 5:37pm
I really want to say something eloquent or witty, but my mouth's suddenly gone rather dry and other parts of me rather moist.
A sensational, sensual, descriptive write.
A sensational, sensual, descriptive write.
31st May 2013 6:12pm
Your "barometric" report sums up your displayed pleasure my dear. Thank you reading : )
31st May 2013 10:19pm
1st Jun 2013 6:59am
"......Longing for her to cum so strongly to me..........tongue spliting her wet lips, lanquidly thrusting deeply inside her gasping, biting hole, connected implicitly to her soul. I take it all....."
A powerful connected phrase indeed. You caused me to revisit that one myself.......remnant memories @ 1:58 am not good for this insomniac LOL
A powerful connected phrase indeed. You caused me to revisit that one myself.......remnant memories @ 1:58 am not good for this insomniac LOL
