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Enjoy A Smoke
I smoke...
fuck it
In my sinful skin...
I light that bitch
Underneath this...
nicotine nakedness
Dirty habits...
hard to break
Every drag...
from my lips
I pull it in...
release the smoke
Hold it between...
my sexy fingers
Flick the end...
watch ashes fall
Smoke rises...
in gray waves
I watch it smolder...
til it vanishes
Inviting another puff...
the cherry bright red
Exhaling through...
painted lips
Til I reach the end...
flinging it to the ground
One down...
nineteen more to go
fuck it
In my sinful skin...
I light that bitch
Underneath this...
nicotine nakedness
Dirty habits...
hard to break
Every drag...
from my lips
I pull it in...
release the smoke
Hold it between...
my sexy fingers
Flick the end...
watch ashes fall
Smoke rises...
in gray waves
I watch it smolder...
til it vanishes
Inviting another puff...
the cherry bright red
Exhaling through...
painted lips
Til I reach the end...
flinging it to the ground
One down...
nineteen more to go
Published 28th May 2013
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Anonymous
28th May 2013 5:29pm
start today tl....it's cheaper this way
nice write
strider
nice write
strider
28th May 2013 5:48pm
I haven't had a cigarette in 8 years...
I think about them often!
Thanks Strider ;)
I think about them often!
Thanks Strider ;)
Anonymous
28th May 2013 5:43pm
Lord this makes me want to light up another.
28th May 2013 5:48pm
28th May 2013 5:53pm
I've never been a smoker thank goodness, but my sister was for a long time and she gave it up without looking back, great will power, she did gain weight though, alas another battle.
Nicely penned Tommielyn. :)
Nicely penned Tommielyn. :)
28th May 2013 6:00pm
Oh yes...food, it fills the void for some...must have will power there as well!Keep moving..stay active..eat healthy!I wish her luck!
Thanks for reading :)
Thanks for reading :)
28th May 2013 6:05pm
28th May 2013 6:09pm
28th May 2013 10:52pm
Well done Deborah - from a lifelong non-smoker who prefers non-smoking girls.
28th May 2013 11:25pm
28th May 2013 6:53pm
Just say no, No to the smell
the hell, of possibly getting throat cancer
Like my dad, lung cancer like my uncle
Many reasons to say no, although I
know it's very hard to stop...
Wishing u luck my friend
with ur continued fight to stop. :)
the hell, of possibly getting throat cancer
Like my dad, lung cancer like my uncle
Many reasons to say no, although I
know it's very hard to stop...
Wishing u luck my friend
with ur continued fight to stop. :)
28th May 2013 7:11pm
28th May 2013 11:34pm
29th May 2013 00:51am
29th May 2013 00:39am
I don't smoke ... Never have - never took to it; yet there are those - few they may be - that make it look cool - even sexy. This poem made me think of those few.
29th May 2013 00:52am
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