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I Want Him
I don't know him
but I want him
I want him to
take me into his
arms and feel my
body on his
I want to feel his
length grow just
from being close
to me
I want him to feel
my warmth
envelope him as
we perform for
one another
I want him to enjoy
my mouth kissing
his length
my tongue thrashing
over his tip
I want him to lean
back in ecstacy
until he loses all
self control giving
me what I want
I want him to let
me do it again
so he'll never forget
the rapturous
delight I've given him
but I want him
I want him to
take me into his
arms and feel my
body on his
I want to feel his
length grow just
from being close
to me
I want him to feel
my warmth
envelope him as
we perform for
one another
I want him to enjoy
my mouth kissing
his length
my tongue thrashing
over his tip
I want him to lean
back in ecstacy
until he loses all
self control giving
me what I want
I want him to let
me do it again
so he'll never forget
the rapturous
delight I've given him
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Re: I Want Him
Anonymous
28th May 2013 3:46pm
nice heartfelt write tl...strider!

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Anonymous
28th May 2013 6:01pm
tommielynn,
If your want plays out like you have written; there will be no forgetting! HOT write!!!
tornado
If your want plays out like you have written; there will be no forgetting! HOT write!!!
tornado

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Anonymous
28th May 2013 6:02pm
tommielynn,
If your want plays out like you have written; there will be no forgetting! HOT write!!!
tornado
If your want plays out like you have written; there will be no forgetting! HOT write!!!
tornado

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29th May 2013 2:20am
nicely written Tommie
you've a knack for the sensual and a good imagination to ..pull it off.
good stuff
you've a knack for the sensual and a good imagination to ..pull it off.
good stuff
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29th May 2013 9:20am
Wow,what a lucky fella......lots of attention to detail,hell never forget that delight,and hell be wanting you always
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Thanks for reading and the awesome comment shorny69 :)
I love your profile pic...;)
I love your profile pic...;)
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