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Re: To Taste Your Brand of Sin…
Anonymous
25th May 2013 8:02pm
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re: Re: To Taste Your Brand of Sin…
25th May 2013 8:37pm
Thank you Gabriel, glad you enjoyed the tidbits of this piece and liked its flavor. Lol
Red
Red
Re: To Taste Your Brand of Sin…
Anonymous
25th May 2013 9:32pm
Lovely write red!!!
strider...
strider...
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re: Re: To Taste Your Brand of Sin…
25th May 2013 10:37pm
Re: To Taste Your Brand of Sin…
25th May 2013 11:13pm
I was truly caught up in the rapture of this sinfully sensual write.
The title was deliciously tasteful!
Red, your erotica is a delight to read! Xo
The title was deliciously tasteful!
Red, your erotica is a delight to read! Xo
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re: Re: To Taste Your Brand of Sin…
25th May 2013 11:37pm
So says the woman with exquisite pieces in this genre, Thank you so very much Ms.Rain.
Red
Red
Re: To Taste Your Brand of Sin…
26th May 2013 1:20am
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26th May 2013 2:18am
Re: To Taste Your Brand of Sin…
Anonymous
26th May 2013 5:40am
Red, I am blown away by this write. I love the emphasis on scent. Scent is a powerful thing that, at least for me, can drive you wild :)
Your word usage is amazing as well/ My favorite stanza:
"The ambrosia
Your masculinity exudes
Awakens the sensitivity
My venus alludes"
Damn that's beautiful
Your word usage is amazing as well/ My favorite stanza:
"The ambrosia
Your masculinity exudes
Awakens the sensitivity
My venus alludes"
Damn that's beautiful
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re: Re: To Taste Your Brand of Sin…
26th May 2013 8:30am
Wow Lerdgoin! well the way I see it poetry is written art and so if I am trying to paint you a picture with my words then I have to make sure the "colors" of words are right, which why my vocabulary/choice of words is important. Thank you so much. :-)
Red
Red
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Anonymous
26th May 2013 8:58am
I try, as well, to paint with words. I love the feeling when all of the words flow almost as if conjured by magic rather than concentrated thought...as if we are merely conduits for words collected by a universal source.
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26th May 2013 2:04pm
Re: To Taste Your Brand of Sin…
26th May 2013 12:57pm
Throws a bucket of cold water over Gypsy LOL!
A wonderful piece of sensuality my dear. :)
A wonderful piece of sensuality my dear. :)
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re: Re: To Taste Your Brand of Sin…
26th May 2013 2:06pm
Re: To Taste Your Brand of Sin…
26th May 2013 2:23pm
re: Re: To Taste Your Brand of Sin…
Thank you very much Daniella; Explicitness is something I avoid on purpose. This is erotica, when you cross over from innuendos and insinuations of what could be, it becomes written pornography.
I appreciate you stopping by to read this piece.
Red
I appreciate you stopping by to read this piece.
Red
Re: To Taste Your Brand of Sin…
Anonymous
26th May 2013 3:53pm
A seductive title backed up by the pedigree of your engaging artistry!!! and your brand is an essential ingredient in the world of poetry..lovely write!
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re: Re: To Taste Your Brand of Sin…
26th May 2013 4:05pm
Such a wonderful comment leaves me humbled Naajir, I try to bring you all something worth reading and enjoying, I am just happy it is so.
Thank you my friend
Thank you my friend
Re: To Taste Your Brand of Sin…
27th May 2013 2:17am
Painted "Erotica" indeed...Juicy and curvaceous in all the right places-Pen On Dear Red!!!
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27th May 2013 3:02am