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My Naughty Little Talent
You're sweating and you're hard,
and i see you want release.
But i take it slow, coz it's a Start,
For both you and me.
You roll your head back, and moan,
as you feel the warm texture of my lips.
And play with your sac, oh so lightly,
with my finger tips.
I lick slowly, from tip to base.
I kiss and caress with out a haste.
You hiss silently, as i continue my torturous pleasure.
And I move my hand, up and down, increasing heated pressure.
You unwillingly thrust into my hand,
Because you're slowly loosing control
So i decide to stop the torment,
and start to blow.
You hold unto my hair,
to ease my descent.
I take in your thick tool,
and shockingly long length.
I like the taste of you,
so i pick up the paste.
I smile at myself at your weakness,
and try not to race.
After moaning, and a lot of thrusting,.
I see u can't take it any longer.
I feel you start tensing,
And though you want to, can't take it further.
Without any warning, and an animalistic groan.
You shoot your load down my throat.
You look sheepishly at me, though i thought we were done.
Little did i know, that now, it was my turn.
and i see you want release.
But i take it slow, coz it's a Start,
For both you and me.
You roll your head back, and moan,
as you feel the warm texture of my lips.
And play with your sac, oh so lightly,
with my finger tips.
I lick slowly, from tip to base.
I kiss and caress with out a haste.
You hiss silently, as i continue my torturous pleasure.
And I move my hand, up and down, increasing heated pressure.
You unwillingly thrust into my hand,
Because you're slowly loosing control
So i decide to stop the torment,
and start to blow.
You hold unto my hair,
to ease my descent.
I take in your thick tool,
and shockingly long length.
I like the taste of you,
so i pick up the paste.
I smile at myself at your weakness,
and try not to race.
After moaning, and a lot of thrusting,.
I see u can't take it any longer.
I feel you start tensing,
And though you want to, can't take it further.
Without any warning, and an animalistic groan.
You shoot your load down my throat.
You look sheepishly at me, though i thought we were done.
Little did i know, that now, it was my turn.
Published 25th May 2013
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31st May 2013 1:13pm
31st May 2013 6:35pm
thank you... I wanted to do Part 2 but was not sure how part 1 would be accepted like...
but now i know... :-)
I'll definitely put it up...
but now i know... :-)
I'll definitely put it up...
5th Jun 2013 1:56pm
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12th Aug 2013 1:14pm
12th Aug 2013 6:11pm
23rd Nov 2013 9:25am
i think this is not good,its PERFECT,you are a talented write,i wish to work with you someday...
24th Nov 2013 3:34am
lol... thank YOu...
it surprises me that people still read my old peoms!
REally, thank you very much
^_^
it surprises me that people still read my old peoms!
REally, thank you very much
^_^
24th Oct 2014 11:13pm
I move my hand, up and down, increasing heated pressure
thats a guys gal
they will love it
that way
and then ask u to stay
up till they part ur throat away
and u gulp
thats a guys gal
they will love it
that way
and then ask u to stay
up till they part ur throat away
and u gulp
haha... well thank you for the addition... lol...
i've only wrote 2 Erotic poems, just to prove to myself that I can... didn't really write it to send a message or anything. I try to keep bedroom play ... for the bedroom... ;-)
i've only wrote 2 Erotic poems, just to prove to myself that I can... didn't really write it to send a message or anything. I try to keep bedroom play ... for the bedroom... ;-)
28th Oct 2014 7:20pm
this site is an open bedroom
where guys and gals
more lonely than busy
come to toy
as if they were in your bedroom
holding their own toys
especially boys
as if they were entering ur doll house
in the lower valley
where they saw jack entering inside sally
like a small mouse
tying to fly all over the screen
and as they cum
they scream
oh mommy i made it
tis cumming cumming and now gummy
please suck it.....
oh now they speak to you
in poetry
do more you
will compose more
and all will enjoy
your juices much more
of that be sure
they are guys after all..
noses in hoses what for!
where guys and gals
more lonely than busy
come to toy
as if they were in your bedroom
holding their own toys
especially boys
as if they were entering ur doll house
in the lower valley
where they saw jack entering inside sally
like a small mouse
tying to fly all over the screen
and as they cum
they scream
oh mommy i made it
tis cumming cumming and now gummy
please suck it.....
oh now they speak to you
in poetry
do more you
will compose more
and all will enjoy
your juices much more
of that be sure
they are guys after all..
noses in hoses what for!
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