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Where I Sit
This
is where
I seek out
sea shells from the sea shore and sandy beach.
I harvest grains of sand in my mind's eye
watching pebbles
wavering
where I
sit.
Published 1st Nov 2010
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1st Nov 2010 5:15pm
The way that long line starting 'sea shells' follows those three short lines makes it run like a wave. I love the quiet pointedness of this poem.
8th Nov 2010 2:23am
Thank you for your comment. This tetractys style is challenging to write. I love it.
12th Jan 2011 3:22pm
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