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Do you even Remember
Do you even remember
The trees falling over from
Your mighty axe
As we clean the land
For our homestead
Do you even remember
The glow of the fire
On our faces
As we spoke of our dreams
To live off the land
Do you even remember
Our pledge to toil
On fertile loamy ground
To tie the sheaves
To jump the broom
Do you even remember me
Who wiped your brow
Who slaked your thirst
Who nursed your hurts
Who gave you comfort
I am still here
A shadow of your past
As you are shadows in mine
Time will not rewind
But memories remind
The trees falling over from
Your mighty axe
As we clean the land
For our homestead
Do you even remember
The glow of the fire
On our faces
As we spoke of our dreams
To live off the land
Do you even remember
Our pledge to toil
On fertile loamy ground
To tie the sheaves
To jump the broom
Do you even remember me
Who wiped your brow
Who slaked your thirst
Who nursed your hurts
Who gave you comfort
I am still here
A shadow of your past
As you are shadows in mine
Time will not rewind
But memories remind
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Re: Do you even Remember
23rd May 2013 4:19am
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23rd May 2013 5:19am
Re: Do you even Remember
23rd May 2013 9:02am
And such memories can be so binding, life and people bring so many disappointments and letdowns.
Great write Grace.
Great write Grace.
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re: Re: Do you even Remember
24th May 2013 2:45am
Re: Do you even Remember
23rd May 2013 10:31am
Suitcases of memories...
Favorite line:
Time will not rewind
But memories remind
Nice piece Grace.
Favorite line:
Time will not rewind
But memories remind
Nice piece Grace.
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re: Re: Do you even Remember
24th May 2013 2:46am
Re: Do you even Remember
Anonymous
23rd May 2013 11:12am
Yes grace I do!
nice write
strider...
nice write
strider...
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re: Re: Do you even Remember
24th May 2013 2:47am
Re: Do you even Remember
23rd May 2013 4:18pm
re: Re: Do you even Remember
24th May 2013 2:48am
Its good to recollect memories in dreams; they are softer somehow. Thanks for reading me Terry.
Re: Do you even Remember
23rd May 2013 9:09pm
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24th May 2013 2:49am
Re: Do you even Remember
24th May 2013 9:25am
The past with a loved one is always sweet. It is worth turning to when the present is as bitter as aloe. Yet sometimes the memories cause tears and rancor. Such is the life of man.
A good memory must not be allowed to evanesce into nothingness. It must be dearly owned and forever cherished. There are not many good memories in the world.
Good write, Grace.
A good memory must not be allowed to evanesce into nothingness. It must be dearly owned and forever cherished. There are not many good memories in the world.
Good write, Grace.
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re: Re: Do you even Remember
24th May 2013 10:10am
Yes, memories of good times, yes. sometimes though, we are just someone's past, best left forgotten. Thanks Demo, for reading and commenting.
Re: Do you even Remember
26th May 2013 2:48am
No regrets. character building and land clearing.
Thank you. I too have these memories.
Thank you. I too have these memories.
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re: Re: Do you even Remember
26th May 2013 3:29am
Oh, no regrets at all elquigirl, but to be remembered for such would be nice. Thanks for reading and commenting.
Re: Do you even Remember
26th May 2013 4:08pm
That was a Great piece Grace!!
Awesome write!! I wrote a piece called"DO YOU?" also. Love your pen!!
Sir Lancelott
Awesome write!! I wrote a piece called"DO YOU?" also. Love your pen!!
Sir Lancelott
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26th May 2013 4:43pm