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Sonata
Hopelessly dependent on your heads and hands
were the pieces of me strewn on your platters
spinning wildly, correcting, dissecting my faces
praying for movement of the allegro, sans.
*{An insidious little fox with her naughty tail
came to wrap around my being and close
never you mind what transpired next,
a shattering soul was no longer frail.}*
But back and forth the fugue swings
never fulfilling the adagio’s haste
the remnants of me are long since lost
scrambling for nothing, my madness sings.
Now I am left with no memory or past
now there’s naught to look forward to
now I can die a regretful death
now the scherzo, takes flight; at last.
No tears shall fill this olive grove
the sorrows of a few grace its arches
the final movement is now at hand
slump, lively, into the irony of the allegro.
were the pieces of me strewn on your platters
spinning wildly, correcting, dissecting my faces
praying for movement of the allegro, sans.
*{An insidious little fox with her naughty tail
came to wrap around my being and close
never you mind what transpired next,
a shattering soul was no longer frail.}*
But back and forth the fugue swings
never fulfilling the adagio’s haste
the remnants of me are long since lost
scrambling for nothing, my madness sings.
Now I am left with no memory or past
now there’s naught to look forward to
now I can die a regretful death
now the scherzo, takes flight; at last.
No tears shall fill this olive grove
the sorrows of a few grace its arches
the final movement is now at hand
slump, lively, into the irony of the allegro.
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Re: Sonata
Anonymous
21st May 2013 1:49pm
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Gosh but you are good
Your poetry shows an ability to master the craft by spinning your words in a web so smooth that reading it is a pleasure.
Write on
Kitty
Gosh but you are good
Your poetry shows an ability to master the craft by spinning your words in a web so smooth that reading it is a pleasure.
Write on
Kitty
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22nd May 2013 6:30am
I like to kidnap you for a day......just to study your incredible mind! Amazing my dear! AMAZING!Xo
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29th May 2013 8:38pm
why kidnap? can i volunteer?
its all garbage i tell you... this is purely cut/copy/paste of all that's in there. :P
the original pictures were all horrible. lol
thank you!
its all garbage i tell you... this is purely cut/copy/paste of all that's in there. :P
the original pictures were all horrible. lol
thank you!
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15th Jun 2013 4:44am
Oh, well, since you insist. I want to punch you in the face for not appreciating yourself at all, it pisses me off to no end.
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Re: Sonata
21st Aug 2013 7:59am
Your never cease to amaze me with your works,this is the brightest.
Well crafted Dennis:)
Well crafted Dennis:)
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