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My Mouth
He calls my name from his room
I already know what he wants
Just the way he said my name tells me
He's been laying in bed thinking of it
I heard his lust for it when he called
Entering his room he says my name
His brown eyes shine with bad intent
My lips pucker my mouth is juicy
I crawl like a pussycat between his legs
My blue eyes pierce into his heart
He inhales deep and releases
Like an addict he has been craving it
Like a dealer I give it to him
My mouth
I already know what he wants
Just the way he said my name tells me
He's been laying in bed thinking of it
I heard his lust for it when he called
Entering his room he says my name
His brown eyes shine with bad intent
My lips pucker my mouth is juicy
I crawl like a pussycat between his legs
My blue eyes pierce into his heart
He inhales deep and releases
Like an addict he has been craving it
Like a dealer I give it to him
My mouth
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16th May 2013 12:46pm
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16th May 2013 1:48pm
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16th May 2013 1:31pm
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16th May 2013 3:04pm
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Anonymous
16th May 2013 4:17pm
your words swirl and flow tl
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16th May 2013 4:37pm
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16th May 2013 5:26pm
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16th May 2013 5:56pm
I am peer pressure.... the voice inside his head...just a quick
feel of my soft wet tongue...he needs it...I'm the pusher...
I'll tell him how great I will feel...just relax ...and let me flow
through....
Thanks Deborahlee3313 :)
feel of my soft wet tongue...he needs it...I'm the pusher...
I'll tell him how great I will feel...just relax ...and let me flow
through....
Thanks Deborahlee3313 :)
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16th May 2013 5:57pm
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Anonymous
16th May 2013 5:58pm
tommielynn,
Damn! You make supply and demand so much sexier!!!
tornado
Damn! You make supply and demand so much sexier!!!
tornado
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16th May 2013 6:05pm
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Anonymous
- Edited 16th May 2013 6:17pm
16th May 2013 6:13pm
Hi, tommielyn. I realize this is in the erotica board, but It read a little differently to me. I found it to be predatory. The emphasis on calling you from "his" room immediately put me in the mindset of a predatory situation and it didn't abate.
The storyline is easy enough to follow, and your method is good, I just couldn't shake that pedophilia vibe, sorry.
The storyline is easy enough to follow, and your method is good, I just couldn't shake that pedophilia vibe, sorry.
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Don't be sorry...thanks for your honesty!
BTW....
I'm not on any registered list!I ALWAYS ask for I.D. :)
BTW....
I'm not on any registered list!I ALWAYS ask for I.D. :)
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Anonymous
16th May 2013 7:00pm
Bwahahaha!!!! Best reply ever!!
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