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What Is Love?
Love is
the
disjoining
pirouette
of
bacteria,
and the
hushed
kiss
of
infection
just
beneath
your wounds.
the
disjoining
pirouette
of
bacteria,
and the
hushed
kiss
of
infection
just
beneath
your wounds.
Published 27th Oct 2010
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27th Oct 2010 7:10am
Hello all, thanks for stopping by and reading. This techically is not a poem because it is a forum post that I did a while back so yeah. I really liked it and I kind of forgot about it so I decided to post it. I think it was worth it, dont you? :) Thanks again.
27th Oct 2010 8:20am
jeez, what do you think we're doing there, having fun? shit no, we're honing our skills at everything from metaphor to epic lore. it's like ninja school for the socially pathetic. and talk about pathetic... this ain't it! and put the faucet drip one up, that's a great little poem!
27th Oct 2010 8:49am
Haha, ninja school for the poetically inclined? Sounds fun. :P Otay, Ray, I shall do as you say. :)
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Anonymous
29th Oct 2010 9:14pm
This is pretty good. I like the metaphors, I guess I have a whole new look on love now.
30th Oct 2010 00:43am
Aww, I'm glad I flipped your perspective. :) It's always nice to know my mindless drivel has an affect. :D Thanks.
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