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Points of Light
My eyes took to the rays images
as my bound hand, wiped
dust from corners, pillaging
within the complex site
I heard in my ear, Dawn
saying She wasn't very good
I scoffed, innocent songs
hearing these many times
before, holding the phone
With trembling hands
lines etch from face to page
as to how it happened
upon this way, a reckoning
why gold drips, innocence lain
the days leap, emblazon
the gaze, as You stare
into this day, pure
as cloudless sky
laying the phone down
there I was walking
around and around
never leaving, my station
sun melded with evening
I took deep breaths, hoping
this explosion in the distance
was heard with precision
exactly where my mind blew
as my bound hand, wiped
dust from corners, pillaging
within the complex site
I heard in my ear, Dawn
saying She wasn't very good
I scoffed, innocent songs
hearing these many times
before, holding the phone
With trembling hands
lines etch from face to page
as to how it happened
upon this way, a reckoning
why gold drips, innocence lain
the days leap, emblazon
the gaze, as You stare
into this day, pure
as cloudless sky
laying the phone down
there I was walking
around and around
never leaving, my station
sun melded with evening
I took deep breaths, hoping
this explosion in the distance
was heard with precision
exactly where my mind blew
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Re: Points of Light
14th May 2013 10:49pm
You just blew my mind with this! Wow!
Such a beautiful and luminous write!
Pen Love Gabe~
Such a beautiful and luminous write!
Pen Love Gabe~
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14th May 2013 11:50pm
your INK MAKES ME FALL IN LOVE WITH WORDS
EVERY TIME I READ YOUR WORK!
XOXO
FIRE
EVERY TIME I READ YOUR WORK!
XOXO
FIRE
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Anonymous
15th May 2013 00:47am
awesome soul

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15th May 2013 1:04am
Anonymous
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15th May 2013 00:52am
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15th May 2013 1:40pm
This was a beautiful piece the image could not be more perfect nicely done Soul!
Red
Red
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re: Re: Points of Light
15th May 2013 3:16pm
Thank You Dear Red---ahhh i got a Beautiful---humble i am to such a comment from You!!!
Re: Points of Light
15th May 2013 2:36pm
Breath-taking imagery,
your insight is one that
is written with poetic flare
but still unique to you.
Very well written, Soul :)
your insight is one that
is written with poetic flare
but still unique to you.
Very well written, Soul :)
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