Reading you

I feel you on this poem Ataki.. so full of passion lovely lady.. peace Crim

Thank you, Crim.

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I like how this can be read Ataki, a wonderful passionate pen dear. :)

Am honored you think so, Magdalena!

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ataki~you are perfecting your craft

really nice poem here!

strider

Thanks, Strider :)

Sensuous, poetic perfection, Atakti. A thoroughly enjoyable read. Well done! :)

Carlene

You're too kind, Carlene. Thank you...

It's the double meanings that I love about this :)

That was my intention, so thanks for noticing, Matt...

:)

Very cool poem!  Sated, unsated, such is life and literature!  Thank you!  Mike.

Yes, Mike, true. Thanks for you kind words.

What a wonderfully hypnotic, mystical & eerily beautiful poem Atakti!...  A very cool write, that I felt compelled to read over & over again, to let it roll around in my mouth, my head & higher senses, so I could more deeply savor it's intriguingly transcendent tongue!...  A uniquely original & masterful piece, that any truly gifted poet would have been thrilled & proud to have penned!  There seems to be a lucid element of almost shamanic perception in the vision of your words!...

~ OIN

Wow, what a super comment! Thank you very much, for your thoughts and kind words.

:)

Yeah there's some heat there in those words...

Thanks, Gabriel, my friend.  :)

This is a very good metaphor of the sensuous side of love, well written, Ataki!

Thank you Mourganna, for that... :)

Great stuff..ill surely learn from your
Writing.

I'm flattered you think so.

Thank you.  :)

I'm about to praise you again... damn you for deserving it ;)

Every time I read your work I'm just a little more enamored. You rarely misstep, and when you do, most readers don't even notice because it is such a slight miscalculation and your natural propensity for imagery and flow moves them along past it.
This piece has no such moments. It is pure double entendred delight. I almost swooned.

And I'm about to swoon from all the praise!

Should we be lighting up a cigarette together?...

*lights up*

I saw your comment on the guy who thought he wrote a masterpiece and you wrote" Incoming Take cover" you were reading him too. You scared the shit out of me you psychic poet. Don't try to get into my head . All you will find is me lighting my farts on fire dressed like SpongeBob Square pants and eating ham.I will follow you but, I don't think it is of my own free will

Hahaha, well ok then. Thanks for your colorful comment... I'll be keeping a close eye, I smell trouble.

:)

You can smell me too?Fuck

Awesome! Great flow, reads very easily and has a great, intimate but still sexy mysterious feel about it. Your words and poems are very powerful.

Thank you, Izzy, pleased you liked it...

So true Atakti! Nice write sweetheart. Its funny how fast we can become unsated with ourselves, relationships, hell even the world around us. Thanks for sharing.

Thank you, Doc...

:)

I like this piece Atakti, mysterious yet sensual write. You left the reader with 2 choices of interpretations, and that was skillful.

Well, thank you, Dirtfarm, for your generous feedback.