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Abused (The Revenge Poem)
Now, listen to me, you selfish thing
don't blame your pain on me
I'm an innocent in all this
You abused my love
And used it as a permission
to destroy my life
Now i'm not gonna hold back
You get what you deserve
I'm done
I'm not gonna be abused anymore
Ora di liberent te
ulciscar de
ecce ego demetam
sicut fecisti me
don't blame your pain on me
I'm an innocent in all this
You abused my love
And used it as a permission
to destroy my life
Now i'm not gonna hold back
You get what you deserve
I'm done
I'm not gonna be abused anymore
Ora di liberent te
ulciscar de
ecce ego demetam
sicut fecisti me
Published 18th Oct 2010
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18th Oct 2010 11:33pm
19th Oct 2010 00:30am
20th Oct 2010 3:55pm
nice poem deep with pain and a slight bitterness.
is the last stanza written in latin? if so what does it translate? :)
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is the last stanza written in latin? if so what does it translate? :)
x
20th Oct 2010 4:35pm
Yeah, it's written in latin, and it roughly translates toPray the gods can save you
I be revenged of
I will destroy you
as you did to me.
Thanks for noticing and reading it :)
I be revenged of
I will destroy you
as you did to me.
Thanks for noticing and reading it :)
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24th Oct 2010 2:49am
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26th Nov 2010 8:53am
3rd Feb 2012 7:23pm
love the poem and even more the latin. For some reason Latin always works well in dark poetry, epecially when it translates into something as brutal as this. Also i feel a certain connection to this poem because i have been subjected to abusive relationships in the past. keep up the good work :)
Walking away to leave a void is a bomb and a crater. Good write Jacksylverwind!
