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The Aftermath of Immaculate Love
Debilitated from the loss of love,
paralyzed by empty fear.
Infected by a lonely parasite,
vomiting on the floor.
Severed vital veins.
Blood flowing steadily.
Lacerated jugular.
Gasping for breath.
Jumping off the bar stool,
necks perfect fit in the noose.
Last crack,
final silence.
The ultimate bliss,
all encompassing happiness.
Drip
from the shell.
Drip
from the cadaver.
Blood the liquid love,
escape and kiss the floor,
not wanted anymore,
anhydrate and shrivel carcass,
Rest now in congenial serenity.
paralyzed by empty fear.
Infected by a lonely parasite,
vomiting on the floor.
Severed vital veins.
Blood flowing steadily.
Lacerated jugular.
Gasping for breath.
Jumping off the bar stool,
necks perfect fit in the noose.
Last crack,
final silence.
The ultimate bliss,
all encompassing happiness.
Drip
from the shell.
Drip
from the cadaver.
Blood the liquid love,
escape and kiss the floor,
not wanted anymore,
anhydrate and shrivel carcass,
Rest now in congenial serenity.
Published 9th Sep 2009
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9th Sep 2009 8:55am
The set out is very effective. Flowing verses to explain a situation, and short bursts of reality to emphasise meaning. Nice work!
9th Sep 2009 9:39pm
11th Sep 2009 3:26am
I really love the way your poetry is not just wording, your words are so specifically placed, I havn't really seen poetry like this
12th Sep 2009 2:55pm
Once again, I read, and ponder...Love your work...I wonder as I ponder.....what motivates your writing....dont tell. It might ruin it!
Good work, as always!
Good work, as always!
5th Nov 2009 6:39pm
Anonymous
29th Oct 2011 6:19am
Very cool spin on love, loss and the pain that follows. An imagjnative read. Thanks for sharing.
