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Morning Rain
Morning rain on the darkened pane
sliding off my memories
of those lonely yesteryears
my remembrance
as rain washing off dirt
encrusted on perceived love
twisted in trust and faith
there would be other rainy mornings
when tears mingled with the showers
to land and invigorate the grass
to melt hardened resolves
as frost on a summer day
breathing on not wanting to know
to feel to see to speak
enforced tranquility of aloneness
unfeeling
living was merely breathing
then Words like little raindrops
fell one by one on a dead soul
the lifeless seed quivered
growth of hope on blackened
bulb, stubs of faith appeared
“It is raining this morning, My Angel!”
“That’s good, My Love, Rain cools…”
sliding off my memories
of those lonely yesteryears
my remembrance
as rain washing off dirt
encrusted on perceived love
twisted in trust and faith
there would be other rainy mornings
when tears mingled with the showers
to land and invigorate the grass
to melt hardened resolves
as frost on a summer day
breathing on not wanting to know
to feel to see to speak
enforced tranquility of aloneness
unfeeling
living was merely breathing
then Words like little raindrops
fell one by one on a dead soul
the lifeless seed quivered
growth of hope on blackened
bulb, stubs of faith appeared
“It is raining this morning, My Angel!”
“That’s good, My Love, Rain cools…”
Written by
Grace
(IDryad)
Published 1st May 2013
| Edited 7th Jun 2024
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Morning rain
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1st May 2013 4:25pm
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1st May 2013 4:32pm
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1st May 2013 5:07pm
Hi Forsaken, thank you for dropping by and reading as well as commenting on the poem.
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Anonymous
1st May 2013 5:12pm
A beautiful rain of words!!! Much enjoyed!
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1st May 2013 5:25pm
Mourganna,thanks for reading and commenting on the poem,I am humbled and honoured.
Re: Morning Rain
1st May 2013 5:16pm
I thought I have read this before and I believe I have seen this comment by Soul as well:
A most Beautiful write Dear Grace!!!
Excellence in Pen!!!
What can I say, kind of weird feeling I guess...
A most Beautiful write Dear Grace!!!
Excellence in Pen!!!
What can I say, kind of weird feeling I guess...
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1st May 2013 5:27pm
I see...thats interesting. I must look that up eh..must be a double post somewhere...thank you for reading, EngrVV. You are always kind.
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2nd May 2013 00:09am
I lack on creative commenting...tis a fault...everything is "Beautiful" and many "indeed's" along with "Wonderful"....Always More is meant and felt with depth of furthest reach.
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2nd May 2013 00:14am
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2nd May 2013 3:22pm
It must have been me and not you Soul...I've seen and hear things before they actually happen and now, it baffles me if it's going to happen in other forms such as TV or this MEDIUM!
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2nd May 2013 6:44pm
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Anonymous
1st May 2013 5:24pm
very well done grace....the cooling rain
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1st May 2013 5:30pm
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1st May 2013 5:47pm
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1st May 2013 5:59pm
I lift praises for the rain.......
.....most beautiful, heartfelt ink dear Grace.
.....most beautiful, heartfelt ink dear Grace.
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1st May 2013 6:32pm
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1st May 2013 7:32pm
The first two stanzas are quite sombre. Then a little hope glimmers towards the end. The rain is symbolic of hope after a period of miserable lovelorn hopelessness.
Good work, Grace. Your style is usually simple, yet elegant. Quite admirable.
Good work, Grace. Your style is usually simple, yet elegant. Quite admirable.
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1st May 2013 11:52pm