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Unsame
We are not the same
You and I
You have feelings
I have logic
I am ugly
You beautiful
You are small
I am big
I have a brain
You have a heart
You prefer four wheels
I roll on two
I prepare for war
As you pray for peace
Not alike at all
Me and you
You still worship my cock
I will love you forever
You and I
You have feelings
I have logic
I am ugly
You beautiful
You are small
I am big
I have a brain
You have a heart
You prefer four wheels
I roll on two
I prepare for war
As you pray for peace
Not alike at all
Me and you
You still worship my cock
I will love you forever
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Re: Unsame
26th Apr 2013 6:57pm
Re: Unsame
26th Apr 2013 7:44pm
Re: Unsame
29th Apr 2013 3:26pm
hmm... i liked the whole thing except the last part... kinda ruined it for me.. but other than that nice work.
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Re: Unsame
29th Apr 2013 4:33pm
Re: Unsame
29th Apr 2013 4:49pm
Re: Unsame
29th Apr 2013 7:11pm
yes...could feel you
but try to remember
opposite atract
and that can be HOT
but try to remember
opposite atract
and that can be HOT
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Re: Unsame
30th Apr 2013 4:23pm
"I roll on two" my favourite line.. The long winding road, alas I have four but would prefer two.
Nicely penned and expressed Hawkdude.
Nicely penned and expressed Hawkdude.
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Re: Unsame
1st May 2013 6:58pm