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PLACE FOR LITERARY ASSIGNATIONS
(Dedicated to DUP Erotic Poems section. I liken each poem to a room in a hotel.)
Best place, I think,
In pen and ink
Couples can slink
(Nudge-nudge, wink-wink!)
Strip to the pink,
Indulge a kink
(Bondage chains clink),
Bodily link,
Of lust deep drink
Until they sink
To sleep a wink.
(Erections shrink.)
Best place, I think,
In pen and ink
Couples can slink
(Nudge-nudge, wink-wink!)
Strip to the pink,
Indulge a kink
(Bondage chains clink),
Bodily link,
Of lust deep drink
Until they sink
To sleep a wink.
(Erections shrink.)
Published 23rd Apr 2013
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All over in a blink!
Premature ejaculation
Not good for assignation!
But excellent alliteration
Well and wittily written
I was smitten. :-)
Premature ejaculation
Not good for assignation!
But excellent alliteration
Well and wittily written
I was smitten. :-)
23rd Apr 2013 11:00pm
Thank you for your rhyming feedback. However, if there had been premature ejaculation there would be no bodily link. I placed the 'erections shrink' at the end.
Anonymous
23rd Apr 2013 10:53pm
Solomon_Song,
Nicely done! I like the staccato construction. Enjoyed, especially the tip to the Flying Circus ; )
tornado
Nicely done! I like the staccato construction. Enjoyed, especially the tip to the Flying Circus ; )
tornado
24th Apr 2013 1:32pm
