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Daily Bread
He walked out of a store
Bread in hand
dough in the other.
Envisioned Her standing
stillness in the street
only movement, was.
His racing Heart, thumping
outlines, reverberating Images
that become clearer with time.
Pacing his breath so
as not to pass out,
collapses upon his
dreamy thoughts.
Yesterday, today, tomorrow
Infinite Delicate Perfection.
where shall we the stream
flow in hope the sea...
mini are crafts that bring us
to encompassing the Ark.
Floating along right in
center of the eye
storms grow readily
blanketing countryside, raising
grasses anticipation,
plush green these fields
grow in tall, beds of essence.
The man focuses, takes a bite
of his bread and heads for home.
Bread in hand
dough in the other.
Envisioned Her standing
stillness in the street
only movement, was.
His racing Heart, thumping
outlines, reverberating Images
that become clearer with time.
Pacing his breath so
as not to pass out,
collapses upon his
dreamy thoughts.
Yesterday, today, tomorrow
Infinite Delicate Perfection.
where shall we the stream
flow in hope the sea...
mini are crafts that bring us
to encompassing the Ark.
Floating along right in
center of the eye
storms grow readily
blanketing countryside, raising
grasses anticipation,
plush green these fields
grow in tall, beds of essence.
The man focuses, takes a bite
of his bread and heads for home.
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Re: Daily Bread
20th Apr 2013 11:47pm
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20th Apr 2013 11:54pm
Re: Daily Bread
21st Apr 2013 00:07am
Oh this was filled with all types of goodness!
The message, your flow, your delivery, was all grand!
You wowed me! Thanks for sharing your Daily Bread with us! :)
The message, your flow, your delivery, was all grand!
You wowed me! Thanks for sharing your Daily Bread with us! :)
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21st Apr 2013 00:12am
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21st Apr 2013 2:09am
A wonderful captivating piece Soul, love the picture too, it is breathtaking. :)
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21st Apr 2013 3:50am
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Anonymous
21st Apr 2013 2:59am
Twisty good write soul...
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21st Apr 2013 3:51am
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21st Apr 2013 3:05am
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21st Apr 2013 3:52am
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21st Apr 2013 7:44am
I thought the picture worked very well with the poem, I would describe the whole write as 'fresh' not sure why but that word seems to have latched
onto it.
Much enjoyed, inspiriting write.
onto it.
Much enjoyed, inspiriting write.
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21st Apr 2013 9:46am
Thank You Dear Scribbler:)
I so love how The words pop to You
describing writes-always fitting:)
I so love how The words pop to You
describing writes-always fitting:)
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21st Apr 2013 7:32pm
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Anonymous
21st Apr 2013 12:59pm
Emits a certain eeriness..a quiet desperation quickly converted to a shoulder shrug and carry on..pretty cool how you've done this.
nice work :-)
enjoyed the read ..
nice work :-)
enjoyed the read ..
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21st Apr 2013 7:36pm
HA!!!:)))
hehe the creep like the loon is on the path hehehe
Thank You for the read and Kind comment Dear Miki:)
hehe the creep like the loon is on the path hehehe
Thank You for the read and Kind comment Dear Miki:)
Re: Daily Bread
22nd Apr 2013 11:02pm
By the time I got to the end I had totally forgotten about the question I had about the guy getting bread and walking out with dough! (so many ways I could go with that one)
Your words were a nice way to stimulate brain activity!
Your words were a nice way to stimulate brain activity!
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23rd Apr 2013 00:13am
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23rd Apr 2013 4:01am
This was simply beautiful...
I am on a journey through your poetry...
You have a timeless style of writing...
I much enjoyed this!
Fire
I am on a journey through your poetry...
You have a timeless style of writing...
I much enjoyed this!
Fire
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23rd Apr 2013 4:46am
I am Honored And humbled Fire!!!
Thank You for such warm words!!!
So greatly appreciate Your Time and Heart!!!
Thank You for such warm words!!!
So greatly appreciate Your Time and Heart!!!
Re: Daily Bread
23rd Apr 2013 6:01pm
Daily Bread of contemplation.....you gave me the visual...one way...,then another....ended back again....wonderful my friend....enjoyed
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23rd Apr 2013 6:20pm
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23rd Apr 2013 6:46pm
Seems uncertain of what tomorrow brings? You got it right, Soul, FOCUS! There is deep meaning in your daily bread...love it!!!
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23rd Apr 2013 9:09pm
:) Thank You Engr. honored You liked it:)
Uncertain of the how's...and just what mini's :)
Uncertain of the how's...and just what mini's :)
Re: Daily Bread
23rd Apr 2013 11:09pm
Your pieces always seem to have an ethereal quality to them beautiful.
Red
Red
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Re. Daily Bread
Anonymous
19th Oct 2015 2:01am
..and he makes a decision despite all the choices he's made and all the uncertainties.
Isn't that what life is all about?! we keep marching on.
Isn't that what life is all about?! we keep marching on.
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19th Oct 2015 11:58am
Exactly, it's knowing ones hope....his needed truths and visions.
life being there- taking the bite- knowing what why and whom will make his perfect dream- truth!!!
Thank you for reading this humble Write Vee!!!
life being there- taking the bite- knowing what why and whom will make his perfect dream- truth!!!
Thank you for reading this humble Write Vee!!!