Spring-a-linga sing-song

this feels like "I'm ready..but then again.."
LOL
that's my take and right or wrong-I like the write,
great work Mr A. :-)

Thank you, miki.

Full of the joys of spring, it sounds like... the spacing adds to the sense of space.

An original take, good work.  (Charon, huh? you can't help the sophisticated stuff, can you?)

:)

Come on. Charon isn't too sophisticated. Ferryman is a bit of a mouthful.

Cheers for stopping by, Atakti.

ye float me boat, eye'll float you'rn.....don't abandon ship, dear fella....wait til
yr a creepy old castoff like....
oh,
yknow,
nevermind....

pet thee dawgie for me

Better cast off than integrated, saxman.

Thank you for the words.

The separation between each line strikes me as pointless - this poem would be easier on the eye, I think, if it was one or two verses - but other than that it's a short, punchy ditty which can't escape your natural depth and sense of harsh beauty, even if you have labelled it upbeat. Thank you for the read. x

Yeah the spacing looks messy, and it is. I'll tinker with it. Also think the word 'smile' is misleading here. There was a darker humour intended with that smile.
It's not sunshine, but it works as upbeat I think.

Thanks for the eyes, Jack.

Mezmerizeing and lingering

Oh god, I hope it doesn't smell. :) thanks.

Ok. Cheers, pal. :)