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When I first saw you...
...Delving into the unknown,
normally not my style
but like lightening,
struck by the 'light'
in your smile
I fell over myself,
as the heart raced awhile...
Awed by the hint
of sparkle in your eye
A lump in the throat,
followed by a sigh...
Hit with a sense
of as yet,
an unearthed passion
Can this vision
be the dream
of a love's unmasking..?
normally not my style
but like lightening,
struck by the 'light'
in your smile
I fell over myself,
as the heart raced awhile...
Awed by the hint
of sparkle in your eye
A lump in the throat,
followed by a sigh...
Hit with a sense
of as yet,
an unearthed passion
Can this vision
be the dream
of a love's unmasking..?
Published 16th Apr 2013
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16th Apr 2013 9:58am
16th Apr 2013 3:21pm
Anonymous
14th May 2013 4:54am
Love at first sight. How awesome. :)
14th May 2013 5:14am
Yup it was, sadly that was a long/short lifetime ago :(
but hey it inspired some decent ink! Lol
Thank u my friend :)
but hey it inspired some decent ink! Lol
Thank u my friend :)
17th Oct 2016 2:36pm
17th Oct 2016 3:05pm
WOW... U went into my archives pretty deep! :) n made me realize many people didn't seem to like this lol but I'm happy you did, thank u so much my friend :)
