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sadistic
people quiver when they see me,
and i LOVE it!
without their plentiful screams
i'd have no SMILE on this cursed face.
each excruciating slash
brings empty TEARS to my sockets.
when you walk by me,
know a game is being planned out just FOR YOU!
and i LOVE it!
without their plentiful screams
i'd have no SMILE on this cursed face.
each excruciating slash
brings empty TEARS to my sockets.
when you walk by me,
know a game is being planned out just FOR YOU!
Published 5th Oct 2010
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5th Oct 2010 5:51pm
i hope you're not planning on killing me miss ellis...
:( *puppy eyes*
another great piece to your collection!
i especially like the way you have capitalised those few words to make out a short sentence of - LOVE, SMILE, TEARS, FOR YOU! is this a dark poem about a relationship?
either way i enjoyed reading it :)
great work
xx
:( *puppy eyes*
another great piece to your collection!
i especially like the way you have capitalised those few words to make out a short sentence of - LOVE, SMILE, TEARS, FOR YOU! is this a dark poem about a relationship?
either way i enjoyed reading it :)
great work
xx
5th Oct 2010 9:04pm
thanks for spending your time to read my poem launa, once again you're comments are appreciated :)
and no i wont be killing you :P
and well done on noticing the relationship part of the poem x
14th Oct 2010 00:08am
