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The Coloured Cube
The coloured cube sits there flashing
like a shower of events that I can't understand .
Noises emit in bursts of rage
from the square intruder .
Harmlessly known as Television .
Sometimes words and thoughts get lost , lost in the air we breathe .
The reason is because of that electronic demon diverting ourselves from ourselves .
This is why I'm a cruciverbalist , Scrabble player
a writer .
Published 11th Apr 2013
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11th Apr 2013 1:35am
Our need to be entertained and informed every seconds of our life has led to this...staring at a box against the wall, and recently on our palms too (smartphone). What price development.
11th Apr 2013 9:51am
Anonymous
11th Apr 2013 2:16am
Boob tube fore sure diddi
nice write
strider
nice write
strider
11th Apr 2013 9:59am
Anonymous
11th Apr 2013 8:58am
trying to sell us a new perspective based on a perspective lost..television and media are not so bad but we have too many fools watching without the sense of a jackass for making informed decisions or forming solid opinions.. propagating this mind numbed , dumbed, burned culture..remnants of all the mistakes made.
Nice write there Paul and conveys a real truth. I like your poetic style so much more when you expound like this and put a bit more into the reader understanding what you write..great flow and structure and clever, well made point. Nice pen :-)
Nice write there Paul and conveys a real truth. I like your poetic style so much more when you expound like this and put a bit more into the reader understanding what you write..great flow and structure and clever, well made point. Nice pen :-)
11th Apr 2013 10:03am
11th Apr 2013 10:07am
11th Apr 2013 7:14pm
True words...
I suggest a small change here: "electronic demon diverting ourselves from ourselves"
to "electronic demon diverting us from ourselves"
I suggest a small change here: "electronic demon diverting ourselves from ourselves"
to "electronic demon diverting us from ourselves"
11th Apr 2013 10:36pm
16th Apr 2013 6:19pm
16th Apr 2013 7:07pm
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7th Aug 2013 2:00am
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