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Life and Time
Scribbling names on sands of time
Written through sorrows and pain
Inscribed too with love and joy
Many places and faces seen
held for a while, and moving on
Traipsing on, leaving foot prints
On receding memories
Yesteryears fast moving on
Away, away into horizons
Behind, pushed back by time
Forward we go, never pausing
Ticking clocks merciless
Prod our back with many frowns
As we try to dig our heels
On porous highway silt
Broken may the timekeeper
But never the time master
Awry or neat life can be
Or as tipped-over chess boards
but there is no pause on life-roads.
Written through sorrows and pain
Inscribed too with love and joy
Many places and faces seen
held for a while, and moving on
Traipsing on, leaving foot prints
On receding memories
Yesteryears fast moving on
Away, away into horizons
Behind, pushed back by time
Forward we go, never pausing
Ticking clocks merciless
Prod our back with many frowns
As we try to dig our heels
On porous highway silt
Broken may the timekeeper
But never the time master
Awry or neat life can be
Or as tipped-over chess boards
but there is no pause on life-roads.
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10th Apr 2013 00:42am
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10th Apr 2013 00:45am
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10th Apr 2013 00:48am
Re: Life and Time
10th Apr 2013 2:45am
Thank you, I like this a lot. "but there is no pause on life-roads." is pretty wicked, and a good closing line, it really lingers. The flow is gentle, which is pretty cool considering the theme.
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10th Apr 2013 4:43am
We dont usually pause on the conveyor belt of life. Thank you Hellz for reading and commenting...so kind of you.
Re: Life and Time
10th Apr 2013 3:02am
There is some kind of good beats in it like the tic tock of a clock, which makes it lyrical and as such, can be sung!
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10th Apr 2013 4:44am
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Anonymous
10th Apr 2013 3:15am
Indeed no pause grace
good luck
strider
good luck
strider
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10th Apr 2013 4:44am
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10th Apr 2013 9:18am
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10th Apr 2013 10:39am
Re: Life and Time
11th Apr 2013 4:06pm
Love this Grace,
That last stanze left a stamp for me to ponder the rest of the day
Much love
and good luck
G
That last stanze left a stamp for me to ponder the rest of the day
Much love
and good luck
G
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11th Apr 2013 8:55pm
Re: Life and Time
11th Apr 2013 4:55pm
I feel as though I can truly relate to your wonderful pen work. A great read as many of the other poems written by your hand. Wonderful!
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11th Apr 2013 8:56pm