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Clouds
A seer speaks to ears of refusal
who see with eyes of glazed over avariciousness
taking in the smoke
billowing through lips that kiss only in lust
students of life
who have missed the lessons
for the ground is in tremble
the print too fine
pages of humanity are written in the clouds
if only one imagines...
the laughter of nature
or dip one's toe into hearts that cry
bruised souls
dot the desert floor
the closed eyes never see beyond their view
unaware of the soul within the body
we dismiss the quatrains as just a riddle
ignore their accuracy
throw banquets for the rich
starve the hungry
dismiss evil
call it insanity
Do you see the beauty within clouds
or what man calls "progress"
dieing on the desert floor
who see with eyes of glazed over avariciousness
taking in the smoke
billowing through lips that kiss only in lust
students of life
who have missed the lessons
for the ground is in tremble
the print too fine
pages of humanity are written in the clouds
if only one imagines...
the laughter of nature
or dip one's toe into hearts that cry
bruised souls
dot the desert floor
the closed eyes never see beyond their view
unaware of the soul within the body
we dismiss the quatrains as just a riddle
ignore their accuracy
throw banquets for the rich
starve the hungry
dismiss evil
call it insanity
Do you see the beauty within clouds
or what man calls "progress"
dieing on the desert floor
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7th Apr 2013 4:02pm
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Anonymous
7th Apr 2013 4:07pm
I know it but I love how you've said it!
Well written piece, love the lines=
students of life
who have missed the lessons
for the ground is in tremble
the print too fine
^my fav.'s but it's All good :-)
Well written piece, love the lines=
students of life
who have missed the lessons
for the ground is in tremble
the print too fine
^my fav.'s but it's All good :-)
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9th Apr 2013 11:00pm
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7th Apr 2013 4:27pm
Brilliant poem, very insightful.
Do you see the beauty within clouds
or what man calls "progress"
dieing on the desert floor
^very powerful ending.
Scribbler.
Do you see the beauty within clouds
or what man calls "progress"
dieing on the desert floor
^very powerful ending.
Scribbler.
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9th Apr 2013 11:01pm
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7th Apr 2013 4:42pm
at first I wanted to quote my favorite part of this but then I realized: I would be quoting the whole poem.... great write, I love it :) Thanks
Train.
Train.
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Re: Clouds
7th Apr 2013 5:45pm
This went straight to my heart. A wonderful read to start my day, Ken, thank you.
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9th Apr 2013 11:03pm
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7th Apr 2013 10:38pm
Beautiful Ink Ken! You know how I feel about your work.....always got my head in the clouds! :)
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9th Apr 2013 11:04pm
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Anonymous
7th Apr 2013 11:42pm
Beautiful real write Soul Man.
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