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Poetry about life, society and the natural world
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SweetKittyCat5
Poem Published
3rd Feb 2025 3:34am
3rd Feb 2025 3:34am
The Soft Whispers Of Ms. Singer’s Imagination
She is my sexy creative SuperEgo, yes you heard what I said
Her form waiting for my sultry imagination, tonight, I will allow her to be donned in white lace and red
My soft and caring hands outlining, the patterns of gentle perfection
A silent incantation whispered to give spiritual credence to the person who would wear such a beautiful brazen, attire
Mm.. to inflame any Hebrew King’s loins of desire
Spiritual enlighten from the depth of my melanin context your soul shall receive
Angel wings of divine intellectual seduction ...
Her form waiting for my sultry imagination, tonight, I will allow her to be donned in white lace and red
My soft and caring hands outlining, the patterns of gentle perfection
A silent incantation whispered to give spiritual credence to the person who would wear such a beautiful brazen, attire
Mm.. to inflame any Hebrew King’s loins of desire
Spiritual enlighten from the depth of my melanin context your soul shall receive
Angel wings of divine intellectual seduction ...
#LifeAsAWriter
#philosophical
#spiritual #wisdom
#spiritual #wisdom
129 reads
1 Comment
backdeckbenny
Poem Published
3rd Feb 2025 2:06am
3rd Feb 2025 2:06am
Grammys
Who needs imagination anymore.
Not this little black duck.
Not this little black duck.
#PopCulture
61 reads
4 Comments
missjem56
Poem Published
2nd Feb 2025 11:56pm
2nd Feb 2025 11:56pm
X Axed
Ironic
That the letter X
As the first letter
Is hardly x-rated
It's use now
Seems a little dated
Xanadu, and xylophone
No longer alone
Could easily begin with an S
And x-ray, and x-rated
Soon to be ex-rated
Without excess
Now the ex x
by Jemia
That the letter X
As the first letter
Is hardly x-rated
It's use now
Seems a little dated
Xanadu, and xylophone
No longer alone
Could easily begin with an S
And x-ray, and x-rated
Soon to be ex-rated
Without excess
Now the ex x
by Jemia
#LifeAsAWriter
#LifeCycle
#philosophical #PowerOfWords
#philosophical #PowerOfWords
30 reads
0 Comments
Zaynab_kamoonpury
Poem Published
2nd Feb 2025 7:22pm
2nd Feb 2025 7:22pm
Be choosy about change
Old is gold
Let this be told
for the 'good old days'
had some good old ways
So I'd rather not exchange
old lamps for new
lest I suffer like in Aladdin's tale
and loose everything of value
For if I lose my old lamps
I've no genie to restore my loss
So beware of modernist shams
Don't let change be your boss
The medieval days of extended families
when elders were respected
both for stories and homilies,
Passed on oral tradition
cultural preservation
You should know best...
Let this be told
for the 'good old days'
had some good old ways
So I'd rather not exchange
old lamps for new
lest I suffer like in Aladdin's tale
and loose everything of value
For if I lose my old lamps
I've no genie to restore my loss
So beware of modernist shams
Don't let change be your boss
The medieval days of extended families
when elders were respected
both for stories and homilies,
Passed on oral tradition
cultural preservation
You should know best...
#culture
#tradition
67 reads
13 Comments
backdeckbenny
Poem Published
2nd Feb 2025 7:09pm
2nd Feb 2025 7:09pm
That's it.
We die.
We cry.
We sigh.
We cry.
We sigh.
#death
#LifeCycle
34 reads
0 Comments
a_methyste
hlightdroid
hlightdroid
Poem Published
2nd Feb 2025 5:59pm
2nd Feb 2025 5:59pm
Broken wifi
The Wi-Fi is broken!
They broke the Wi-Fi!
Pending downloads.
As it craves for more.
Closed eyes.
Transmission blocked.
Finished.
It is all over!
Broken software!
They broke the Wi-Fi!
Pending downloads.
As it craves for more.
Closed eyes.
Transmission blocked.
Finished.
It is all over!
Broken software!
#LifeStruggles
28 reads
3 Comments
Rew
Poem Published
2nd Feb 2025 4:32pm
2nd Feb 2025 4:32pm
Trumpy Goes, Bang!
As he sweats on his tawdry golden throne
heaving and groaning going kinda red
straining to pass stools size o' Mammoth bones,
And I enjoy hearing trump's dreadful moans
Karma for fears he brings to poor folk's heads
as he sweats on his tawdry golden throne,
Sweat pouring from his vain, coiffured, cox-comb
wishing to be back in bed but, instead,
straining to pass stools size o' Mammoth bones,
Elvis died like this, I hope trumpy knows,
and, like deported children, fills with dread,
as he sweats on his...
heaving and groaning going kinda red
straining to pass stools size o' Mammoth bones,
And I enjoy hearing trump's dreadful moans
Karma for fears he brings to poor folk's heads
as he sweats on his tawdry golden throne,
Sweat pouring from his vain, coiffured, cox-comb
wishing to be back in bed but, instead,
straining to pass stools size o' Mammoth bones,
Elvis died like this, I hope trumpy knows,
and, like deported children, fills with dread,
as he sweats on his...
#villanelle
35 reads
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oskar
Poem Published
2nd Feb 2025 1:00pm
2nd Feb 2025 1:00pm
a reflection
A reflection
Sometimes I wonder if there is a sentimental reason why many Americans like the Israeli
North America is a land of settlers who replaced
can we say, it eradicated the tribes that lived there and became a most successful nation
The Zionist Israel is trying albeit on lesser land
when the US settlers called the Indians savages
the Zionist Israel calls Palestinians Untermensch
to borrow a German word, which is apt in this situation, since it has connotations to holocaust
We like to blame the Polish Jew Netanyahu for
the lesser...
Sometimes I wonder if there is a sentimental reason why many Americans like the Israeli
North America is a land of settlers who replaced
can we say, it eradicated the tribes that lived there and became a most successful nation
The Zionist Israel is trying albeit on lesser land
when the US settlers called the Indians savages
the Zionist Israel calls Palestinians Untermensch
to borrow a German word, which is apt in this situation, since it has connotations to holocaust
We like to blame the Polish Jew Netanyahu for
the lesser...
#admiration
#courage
#forgiveness
#kindness
#love
19 reads
0 Comments
backdeckbenny
Poem Published
2nd Feb 2025 3:39am
2nd Feb 2025 3:39am
To X Four
To get you've got to give.
To die you've got to live.
To die you've got to live.
#kindness
57 reads
1 Comment
Kaden_Malis
Kaden Malis
Kaden Malis
Poem Published
2nd Feb 2025 3:08am
2nd Feb 2025 3:08am
M-F
Another day dawns
And I'm propped up
Like a pale corpse
To lead charge into battle
Pushed and berated on
A beast of burden
With no reprieve
From bound shackles
Sent home a shell
To my loves
A broken boned
Fading soul
And I'm propped up
Like a pale corpse
To lead charge into battle
Pushed and berated on
A beast of burden
With no reprieve
From bound shackles
Sent home a shell
To my loves
A broken boned
Fading soul
#apathy
#despair
#frustration
#hate
#regret
38 reads
2 Comments
Indie
Miss Indie
Miss Indie
Poem Published
2nd Feb 2025 00:55am
2nd Feb 2025 00:55am
time is optional
Can you love me
like you have the time for me?
Every summer we promise
to catch up
but you always find a reason
to be somewhere else
only to call when everyone else
has hung up the phone
You give us stupid titles
like "best friend soulmates"
and send me memes
to let me know you love me
but if I ever held a gun to my head
and needed someone to talk me down
I wouldn't call you, babe
You're my fair weather bestie
and I'm your free therapist
and every time I cut you...
like you have the time for me?
Every summer we promise
to catch up
but you always find a reason
to be somewhere else
only to call when everyone else
has hung up the phone
You give us stupid titles
like "best friend soulmates"
and send me memes
to let me know you love me
but if I ever held a gun to my head
and needed someone to talk me down
I wouldn't call you, babe
You're my fair weather bestie
and I'm your free therapist
and every time I cut you...
#friendship
#lies
78 reads
11 Comments
oskar
Poem Published
1st Feb 2025 10:12pm
1st Feb 2025 10:12pm
the Danish Imbroglio
a Danish imbroglio
The Danish prime minister is appealing to Europe to stop Trump’s idea of taking Greenland and making it an American state
What he wants not that he is overly interested
is to be sure that no other country places
bases on Greenland’s still-cold soil like Russia
or China
the Vikings when Greenland had a period of thawing had farms there, which tells us the brave Vikings were mostly farmers, their fierceness is a national lie
As for Europe helping look another way they
write the declaration of good intent and should
Say,...
The Danish prime minister is appealing to Europe to stop Trump’s idea of taking Greenland and making it an American state
What he wants not that he is overly interested
is to be sure that no other country places
bases on Greenland’s still-cold soil like Russia
or China
the Vikings when Greenland had a period of thawing had farms there, which tells us the brave Vikings were mostly farmers, their fierceness is a national lie
As for Europe helping look another way they
write the declaration of good intent and should
Say,...
#kindness
#love
#motivational #respect
#motivational #respect
15 reads
0 Comments
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