Love Poems Seeking Friendly Advice
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Poetry about lost love, heartbreak and relationship problems
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Anne-Ri999
Poem Published
Today 10:09am
Today 10:09am
Tell me
how did it feel?
when you stood there
out on the reels
looking down
from the building
did night
lean
apologetic
against you?
Sometimes I bleed
unfinished letters
my pencil hesitant
opening into acceptance
revealing how
he must have landed in my heart chamber
when he jumped from the 14th floor
I incubated lavender in each splinter
knowing it is his birthday soon
and once again I remember
how his chestnut hair ...
when you stood there
out on the reels
looking down
from the building
did night
lean
apologetic
against you?
Sometimes I bleed
unfinished letters
my pencil hesitant
opening into acceptance
revealing how
he must have landed in my heart chamber
when he jumped from the 14th floor
I incubated lavender in each splinter
knowing it is his birthday soon
and once again I remember
how his chestnut hair ...
#FirstLove
#suicide
44 reads
4 Comments
toniscales
Lost Girl
Lost Girl
Poem Published
Yesterday 10:57pm
Yesterday 10:57pm
To My Mother at New Year's
On the phone, my father
urges me to remember you.
I remember your anger,
the luminous swell
of your outdated,
blond beehive;
your cold opulence,
how everything you touched
turned beautiful.
How you smelled of Giorgio,
the gorgeous handwriting
on your envelopes.
In every room,
an elegant vase of flowers,
petals and ivy descending
in perfect patterns;
luxurious dresses
you created yourself.
How I could never fit
into your constellations
of perfection...
urges me to remember you.
I remember your anger,
the luminous swell
of your outdated,
blond beehive;
your cold opulence,
how everything you touched
turned beautiful.
How you smelled of Giorgio,
the gorgeous handwriting
on your envelopes.
In every room,
an elegant vase of flowers,
petals and ivy descending
in perfect patterns;
luxurious dresses
you created yourself.
How I could never fit
into your constellations
of perfection...
#death
#grief
#love
28 reads
0 Comments
SweetKittyCat5
Poem Published
Yesterday 7:44pm
Yesterday 7:44pm
Ocean Front
Atlantis Yacht Club
Aboard A High wind Ocean Front Fleeter
Later That Evening
Lifting my skirt, mmm... licking over my downy hairs
I leaned back in my office chair
It did not matter who heard my moans in delight, a night of his thrusting passion
Mm... got him feening for kitty back scratching
On this private yacht I do not even care
You let me make such passionate love to your face
Cupping my buttocks, your tongue swimming all up in my honey taste
I had to rip open my blouse, my bra, I quickly lifted ...
Aboard A High wind Ocean Front Fleeter
Later That Evening
Lifting my skirt, mmm... licking over my downy hairs
I leaned back in my office chair
It did not matter who heard my moans in delight, a night of his thrusting passion
Mm... got him feening for kitty back scratching
On this private yacht I do not even care
You let me make such passionate love to your face
Cupping my buttocks, your tongue swimming all up in my honey taste
I had to rip open my blouse, my bra, I quickly lifted ...
#lover
#seductive
#water
#angels
#rebirth
107 reads
3 Comments
Riotgirl
Slytly
Slytly
Poem Published
Yesterday 5:45pm
Yesterday 5:45pm
Neglected
Oh, sleep, your mistress, I see she’s won,
While I sit here, the NEGLECTED one.
Drooling on pillows, what a display—
Is this your idea of foreplay?
You pick your bed, so soft, so still,
While I bring fire, excitement, and thrill.
But no, you snore like a lumbering beast,
Ignoring the fact I’m the real feast.
Dream on, genius, enjoy your rest,
Because clearly, effort’s not your best.
I could’ve been laughing, dazzling, divine,
But no—your loyalty dies with bedtime.
Next time I call, and you...
While I sit here, the NEGLECTED one.
Drooling on pillows, what a display—
Is this your idea of foreplay?
You pick your bed, so soft, so still,
While I bring fire, excitement, and thrill.
But no, you snore like a lumbering beast,
Ignoring the fact I’m the real feast.
Dream on, genius, enjoy your rest,
Because clearly, effort’s not your best.
I could’ve been laughing, dazzling, divine,
But no—your loyalty dies with bedtime.
Next time I call, and you...
#boyfriend
#dating
#obsession
27 reads
1 Comment
Kaden_Malis
Kaden Malis
Kaden Malis
Poem Published
Yesterday 1:30pm
Yesterday 1:30pm
Forget
Forget my smile
Forget my laugh
Forget my eyes
Forget all those things you said
You loved so much about me
Forget my utterly unexplainable devotion
To every little whim of yours
Because your happiness was all I wanted, all I needed
Your desires are what I lived to fulfill
Yet it wasn't enough
So please just forget
Everything about me
And hopefully one day I'll be able
To forget about you
Forget my laugh
Forget my eyes
Forget all those things you said
You loved so much about me
Forget my utterly unexplainable devotion
To every little whim of yours
Because your happiness was all I wanted, all I needed
Your desires are what I lived to fulfill
Yet it wasn't enough
So please just forget
Everything about me
And hopefully one day I'll be able
To forget about you
#breakup
#heartbroken
#rejection
#sadness
#separation
49 reads
2 Comments
Anne-Ri999
Poem Published
Yesterday 10:27am
Yesterday 10:27am
a Grimoire 's art
my love is bronze sky
interlacing garlands being drawn
canvassing
this pain(t) is old
amidst vetiver hung low
veil fluttering patchouli
brittle bone brittle heart
jargon blushing brushing
I walk with Sappho
she whispers as her
proclaiming fingers hold
our fountain pens move
a name is given
ripe fruit rests
vessels ...
interlacing garlands being drawn
canvassing
this pain(t) is old
amidst vetiver hung low
veil fluttering patchouli
brittle bone brittle heart
jargon blushing brushing
I walk with Sappho
she whispers as her
proclaiming fingers hold
our fountain pens move
a name is given
ripe fruit rests
vessels ...
#art
64 reads
6 Comments
Kaden_Malis
Kaden Malis
Kaden Malis
Poem Published
Yesterday 4:37am
Yesterday 4:37am
Alone
I wake up alone
Drink my coffee and bourbon
Next to the foggy window
As the cold rain loosens and breaks
Every leaf still left clinging to life
Before they're pushed to the ground
I go out alone
Thinking about the note you left
That day you went away because of
My distance, despair and depression
Saying you needed more to life
Than a series of highs and lows from a
Never ending roller-coaster ride
And the chilling rain continued
I come home alone
Drink my bourbon and coffee
With a little more...
Drink my coffee and bourbon
Next to the foggy window
As the cold rain loosens and breaks
Every leaf still left clinging to life
Before they're pushed to the ground
I go out alone
Thinking about the note you left
That day you went away because of
My distance, despair and depression
Saying you needed more to life
Than a series of highs and lows from a
Never ending roller-coaster ride
And the chilling rain continued
I come home alone
Drink my bourbon and coffee
With a little more...
#addiction
#anxiety
#bipolar
#depression
#MentalHealth
38 reads
5 Comments
Connotation
Poem Published
Yesterday 4:35am
Yesterday 4:35am
Cavernous Echoes
Cavernous echoes
Inside the chamber
Where dust gathers
Course infinity
Ethereal breath amaze
Comfort succumbs
Filthy hands
Dare to handle
Touch a soul
Death inside
Suffocated prison
Paranoia hinted walls
At the prospect
Closing in
An escape alone
Devoid of purpose
Hidden in truth
Moments recall
Universal secrets
Into the abyss
Graven gaze
Eyes deeply
Fixated hypnosis
Mood transforms
Lust tempts
Deity life transpose
Nothing...
Inside the chamber
Where dust gathers
Course infinity
Ethereal breath amaze
Comfort succumbs
Filthy hands
Dare to handle
Touch a soul
Death inside
Suffocated prison
Paranoia hinted walls
At the prospect
Closing in
An escape alone
Devoid of purpose
Hidden in truth
Moments recall
Universal secrets
Into the abyss
Graven gaze
Eyes deeply
Fixated hypnosis
Mood transforms
Lust tempts
Deity life transpose
Nothing...
#girlfriend
#love
#marriage
#metaphor
#prose
46 reads
4 Comments
goodwolf1966
jimmy
jimmy
Poem Published
Yesterday 1:29am
Yesterday 1:29am
only a glimpse
i saw
you, but
such time
quickly
passing,
the image
of
your eyes
brought
to my
soul
a blaze,
but i
did not
burn, and
when i
fell asleep
i held
your vision
in that
stare.
you, but
such time
quickly
passing,
the image
of
your eyes
brought
to my
soul
a blaze,
but i
did not
burn, and
when i
fell asleep
i held
your vision
in that
stare.
#admiration
#beauty
#dreams
#obsession
#romantic
73 reads
7 Comments
a_methyste
hlightdroid
hlightdroid
Poem Published
28th Dec 2024 5:54pm
28th Dec 2024 5:54pm
Snapshot of the underground
So i am taking a snapshot of the underground.
Roots and leafs in the dark.
I cannot resist it!?
I like it dirty!
I like it raw!
Unconquered,
Virgin land with thoughts of wild,
With brown roots, thick stem and soil.
A place a human has never been.
Glowing under the marrow of life.
A second of late.
Everything will be gone.
I got to take the snapshot now!
Go deep into the unknown!
Turn on my torch and shed lights on reefs and threads.
All over vibrating, waking over my inspiration.
I want a memory!
A souvenir...
Roots and leafs in the dark.
I cannot resist it!?
I like it dirty!
I like it raw!
Unconquered,
Virgin land with thoughts of wild,
With brown roots, thick stem and soil.
A place a human has never been.
Glowing under the marrow of life.
A second of late.
Everything will be gone.
I got to take the snapshot now!
Go deep into the unknown!
Turn on my torch and shed lights on reefs and threads.
All over vibrating, waking over my inspiration.
I want a memory!
A souvenir...
#WritingPoetry
52 reads
2 Comments
AddisonLee
Poem Published
28th Dec 2024 1:22pm
28th Dec 2024 1:22pm
Echoes of emotion
In the silence , I hear my heart ,
A whispered echo , a sorrowful start.
The weight of tears, a heavy sea,
A depth of emotion , where I long to be free.
Memories linger, a bittersweet refrain,
A reminder of joy, now tinged with pain.
The ache within, a hollowed space,
A longing for solace , a warm and gentle place.
But even in the shadows, a light will shine,
A beacon of hope, a heart that's still mine.
For in the echoes of emotion, I find my voice,
A whispered promise, a heartfelt choice.
To feel, to heal, to let go, to mend, ...
A whispered echo , a sorrowful start.
The weight of tears, a heavy sea,
A depth of emotion , where I long to be free.
Memories linger, a bittersweet refrain,
A reminder of joy, now tinged with pain.
The ache within, a hollowed space,
A longing for solace , a warm and gentle place.
But even in the shadows, a light will shine,
A beacon of hope, a heart that's still mine.
For in the echoes of emotion, I find my voice,
A whispered promise, a heartfelt choice.
To feel, to heal, to let go, to mend, ...
#TimeHeals
46 reads
2 Comments
DevilsChild
Poem Published
28th Dec 2024 8:00am
28th Dec 2024 8:00am
Reject
you’ve always loved me
kissed me long and hugged me
even when I thought I had nothing left
you never made me feel like a reject
these days I’m a defeatist
found strength in seclusion
let down
but I’m not feeling sorry for myself
quite the opposite
I see a world on fire
wish I could go back to innocence
I still have a piece of it
right by my side
years and it still amazes me
how you can still be so hopeful
it
would
be
a
cold
world
if
you
didn’t
keep
me
warm
kissed me long and hugged me
even when I thought I had nothing left
you never made me feel like a reject
these days I’m a defeatist
found strength in seclusion
let down
but I’m not feeling sorry for myself
quite the opposite
I see a world on fire
wish I could go back to innocence
I still have a piece of it
right by my side
years and it still amazes me
how you can still be so hopeful
it
would
be
a
cold
world
if
you
didn’t
keep
me
warm
#hope
#love
65 reads
3 Comments
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