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I can't find out where to post this poem and video
When i go to submit a poem I want to post it in the spoken word section but I cannot figure out how. This is the post I want to submit
follow link below to the visuals:
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=qcrHTHH27J0
Lyrics:
I feel like a loser
I feel so stupid
no goals reached never reach conclusions
i'm like a fucking idiot
clueless but i'm living it
constantly giving in
bitching that i'm sick of it
why?
can't I ever finish shit I
always let opportunity pass me by
try as i might
still i lie in the night
with no sleep, zero sheep
in my eyes
Turn down the static
i'm a kratom addict
with a bad habit
the last cat to live lavish
and I rap fast, I rap slow
still get no
views, listens
who's dissing?
the list is only missing a few
shit add two
of the who's who
prove i lose
so i snooze
Yeah I said it,
i'm on reddit
straight feeling like a loser
on my computer and twitter
i figure my liver quivers
i've littered my brain
with killers of pain
delivered in vain
a loser the same
who's sober today
beginning to say,
i'll never win in this game
follow link below to the visuals:
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=qcrHTHH27J0
Lyrics:
I feel like a loser
I feel so stupid
no goals reached never reach conclusions
i'm like a fucking idiot
clueless but i'm living it
constantly giving in
bitching that i'm sick of it
why?
can't I ever finish shit I
always let opportunity pass me by
try as i might
still i lie in the night
with no sleep, zero sheep
in my eyes
Turn down the static
i'm a kratom addict
with a bad habit
the last cat to live lavish
and I rap fast, I rap slow
still get no
views, listens
who's dissing?
the list is only missing a few
shit add two
of the who's who
prove i lose
so i snooze
Yeah I said it,
i'm on reddit
straight feeling like a loser
on my computer and twitter
i figure my liver quivers
i've littered my brain
with killers of pain
delivered in vain
a loser the same
who's sober today
beginning to say,
i'll never win in this game
Aftermath
Four final words:
“You are not enough”
I am swallowing razor blades-
cutting out my own tongue;
destroying the evidence
Try to feel regret
One more exasperated sigh
One last trip to the ER
I am mopping up the puddles of
My own blood
Erase me
Try to feel regret
One last fake cry
One last lie hidden behind a devious smile
One last desperate ‘I love you’
attempting to conceal an abundance of
black and blue adorning virgin flesh like
rare jewelry
Stained skin; pain absorbed
Try to feel regret
One last passive aggressive fuck
One more defiant attempt to self destruct
One last breath let out with a quiver
One last time down on two
scraped and bloody knees
One last time
Swallowing razor blades
A.W.
“You are not enough”
I am swallowing razor blades-
cutting out my own tongue;
destroying the evidence
Try to feel regret
One more exasperated sigh
One last trip to the ER
I am mopping up the puddles of
My own blood
Erase me
Try to feel regret
One last fake cry
One last lie hidden behind a devious smile
One last desperate ‘I love you’
attempting to conceal an abundance of
black and blue adorning virgin flesh like
rare jewelry
Stained skin; pain absorbed
Try to feel regret
One last passive aggressive fuck
One more defiant attempt to self destruct
One last breath let out with a quiver
One last time down on two
scraped and bloody knees
One last time
Swallowing razor blades
A.W.
Written by abigailwoods
(Abigail C. Woods)
New/Poem critiques/making connections/improving skills
hey yall i just made this like 20 minutes ago but i feel like i could really utilize this as a tool for making connections with fellow writers while improving my writing skills as well! i have submitted two poems so far so i have to wait a bit before i can post anymore :/ BUT, i would love for you guys to check them out if you are interested and i will always reciprocate comments, likes, critiques, etc. let's do this! (i added my most recent poem feedback would be greatly appreciated and reciprocated!) thnx guys <3
Hello everyone
Here to explore wether my meagre words are up to be called poetry , testing the waters as I want to self publish a book. But it’s ok friends saying poems are good it’s wether complete strangers will appreciate my bite size look at my own raw emotions, so a little apprehensive and excited at the same time