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an unspoken rose
He's sternly
waiting
she's already
disobeyed
due to
her late arrival
Slightly
shaking
and noticeably
rattled
Heightening
awareness
of added
punishment
when breaking the rules
leaves her heart racing
An air
of his slight annoyance
and domineering control
mixes with
submissive greed
and a pinch of fear
B l o s s o m i n g
gorgeously
into ardent
acquiescence
from
corporal commands
she
begs.
pleads.
squirms.
HE.
IS.
FUCKING.
RELENTLESS.
UNYIELDING.
.
.
.
.
.
a
knowing
smile.
(safely
hides
away)
behind
the
taughtness
of her ball gag
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The metaphor of rose is indeed turning point and an expression of submission and acceptance. I never realised that you are a woman with such intensity of passion and quicky sense of tease. You are my amuse.
Love.
KS
Love.
KS
A beautiful expression is a submission and acceptance by dominance. A woman said, "I take out the art of your dominance with my utmost submission. I wasn't aware of it before her statement. I find the same feeling reading your words. She remained mine for many years, I being unaware of my traits. My brown skin was also her attraction that mesmerized her. I read your words and feel as.if I go through that scene.
KS
KS
The openness, uninhibited expression with no control and without an iota of judgement is key to a loving, passionate and sexual relationship that is beyond sex. This is what I experienced in my past relationship that was way more than vanilla. This is what you portrayed and at then end a seal of approval.
I hold you in the highest esteem.
Love
KS
I hold you in the highest esteem.
Love
KS
KristopherSanders said:The openness, uninhibited expression with no control and without an iota of judgement is key to a loving, passionate and sexual relationship that is beyond sex. This is what I experienced in my past relationship that was way more than vanilla. This is what you portrayed and at then end a seal of approval.
I hold you in the highest esteem.
Love
KS
Sending out multiple thank you's for all the very kind comments, KS. You're extremely generous in your time and thought. I'm glad you're enjoying the forum and we're all appreciative for the visits.
*Sometimes hitting 'quote' instead of reply when responding to a particular posting makes it much easier for other readers (and yourself) to see, refer back to and to keep track of what piece it is that you're speaking of, exactly. Especially when you are kind enough to reply multiple times to different postings. I only want make it a better more functional experience for you by helping you streamline your comments, in return making it easier for everyone to read.
Again, thank you for the tremendous support.
-B
KristopherSanders said:
KristopherSanders said:
KristopherSanders said:
I hold you in the highest esteem.
Love
KS
Sending out multiple thank you's for all the very kind comments, KS. You're extremely generous in your time and thought. I'm glad you're enjoying the forum and we're all appreciative for the visits.
*Sometimes hitting 'quote' instead of reply when responding to a particular posting makes it much easier for other readers (and yourself) to see, refer back to and to keep track of what piece it is that you're speaking of, exactly. Especially when you are kind enough to reply multiple times to different postings. I only want make it a better more functional experience for you by helping you streamline your comments, in return making it easier for everyone to read.
Again, thank you for the tremendous support.
-B
KristopherSanders said:
KristopherSanders said:
KristopherSanders said:
AspergerPoet56 said:devil's
flirtatious
whisper
thrusts
deeply
in
naked
curved
lines
beautifully
expressive
sin
flawless
darkness
embraced
as senses
spontaneously
combust
breathless
unrestrained
passion
luscious
eyes
rolling
rhythmic
soul
sighs
as warm
glows slowly
disapates
Wow, AP... just wow.
x
AspergerPoet56 said:
in
darkened
thoughts
i fiercely
want
you....
and this other poem?!?!... I mean...
Romantically erotic like only you pen!
superb 👌🏻
🌹
flirtatious
whisper
thrusts
deeply
in
naked
curved
lines
beautifully
expressive
sin
flawless
darkness
embraced
as senses
spontaneously
combust
breathless
unrestrained
passion
luscious
eyes
rolling
rhythmic
soul
sighs
as warm
glows slowly
disapates
Wow, AP... just wow.
x
AspergerPoet56 said:
in
darkened
thoughts
i fiercely
want
you....
and this other poem?!?!... I mean...
Romantically erotic like only you pen!
superb 👌🏻
🌹
