Poetry competition CLOSED 21st December 2017 7:02pm
WINNER
Anonymous
Anonymous
RUNNER-UP:
Joshuaberry
Being Thankful
God-Is-In-The-Rain
Gregory Rain
Forum Posts: 50
Gregory Rain
Twisted Dreamer
1
Joined 28th Oct 2016Forum Posts: 50
"Ode to the first Reader" (written by Mr.Rain)
Uploading my new work....
At the Deep Underground Poetry....
It makes me feel like a jerk....
Least important person in the world....
Just spamming internet and wasting everyones time with....
Write that is as useless, as its author....
Prehaps it's a myth....
A way the number zero just forces me to feel....
But then the number changes....
God begins to dance in rain....
Single number despair for hope exchanges....
Damn, that makes me just feel like....
There is something i should do....
"Comment" no! write the whole poem! and two words as a gift!
"Thank You"
Uploading my new work....
At the Deep Underground Poetry....
It makes me feel like a jerk....
Least important person in the world....
Just spamming internet and wasting everyones time with....
Write that is as useless, as its author....
Prehaps it's a myth....
A way the number zero just forces me to feel....
But then the number changes....
God begins to dance in rain....
Single number despair for hope exchanges....
Damn, that makes me just feel like....
There is something i should do....
"Comment" no! write the whole poem! and two words as a gift!
"Thank You"
kiko_the_poet
Joined 23rd June 2017
Forum Posts: 22
Lost Thinker
Forum Posts: 22
Thank You to Appreciation
There's so much that we don't realize is a gift
Life for example plus health limbs there's a lot that not everyone gets
I'm thankful I was raised with values
My grandma taught me politeness
My appreciation for her is more than words can express
Cause she raised me n loved me even though I gave alot of stress
My grandma was born blind but believe. Me
She saw more than most sighted people will ever see
Living in the dark ,but stubborn. N stern
For her to ask for your help was something you felt like a honor to earn
She cooked cleaned n took care of her house
My grandma got married twice but raised two generations of kids without a spouse
2daughters my mom n aunt
Then dealt with hell raisers my brother n I
Always gave us such expensive gifts so we enjoy life
I'm extremely thankful for the unreplaceable amount of my n her time I got to enjoy Lean n remember her before she went to a better place
I'm thankful she no longer in pain im thankful I look at my tattoo n see her face
I'm thankful now she can see n thankful that I someone to greet me in heaven eventually
Thank you God for giving me inspiration to always have
I'm thankful God blessed me with my grandma
Life for example plus health limbs there's a lot that not everyone gets
I'm thankful I was raised with values
My grandma taught me politeness
My appreciation for her is more than words can express
Cause she raised me n loved me even though I gave alot of stress
My grandma was born blind but believe. Me
She saw more than most sighted people will ever see
Living in the dark ,but stubborn. N stern
For her to ask for your help was something you felt like a honor to earn
She cooked cleaned n took care of her house
My grandma got married twice but raised two generations of kids without a spouse
2daughters my mom n aunt
Then dealt with hell raisers my brother n I
Always gave us such expensive gifts so we enjoy life
I'm extremely thankful for the unreplaceable amount of my n her time I got to enjoy Lean n remember her before she went to a better place
I'm thankful she no longer in pain im thankful I look at my tattoo n see her face
I'm thankful now she can see n thankful that I someone to greet me in heaven eventually
Thank you God for giving me inspiration to always have
I'm thankful God blessed me with my grandma
Written by kiko_the_poet
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drone
Forum Posts: 2277
Tyrant of Words
10
Joined 3rd Sep 2011 Forum Posts: 2277
I'm thankful
for being
so ignorant
not knowing
what is really
going on
because
it will upset
my comfort zone
for being
so ignorant
not knowing
what is really
going on
because
it will upset
my comfort zone
eswaller
Forum Posts: 765
Dangerous Mind
31
Joined 22nd Dec 2015Forum Posts: 765
Thanks everybody for participating in my first competition. I had a hard time deciding so I let you all vote instead. Amazing entries everyone!! Congratulations StarliteStarfright and Lions_den7!
Joshuaberry
Ancestor
Forum Posts: 231
Ancestor
Fire of Insight
2
Joined 18th Aug 2017 Forum Posts: 231
Oh... I'm so honoured... Thank you Eswaller for the honour. Don't know how to express my gratitude to you and everyone. Much love. Joshua.