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Don't Look Back
wanderer
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Faceless
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Poetry Contest Description
The frame: Entries are to begin from, and end with, these magical words: 'Don't (/Do not) look back'
It has been two fast years since I last started a competition now that I think about it! (*blinks x2)...wow
Okay, okay...so...the above mentioned rule is the one and only limitation you have to overcome.
I hope you find this both tasking and amusing!
We look forward to your entry. Enjoy!
Okay, okay...so...the above mentioned rule is the one and only limitation you have to overcome.
I hope you find this both tasking and amusing!
We look forward to your entry. Enjoy!
OxyMoronicMe
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G.L.
Dangerous Mind
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BlackCarol
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KARMA
Don't look back unless it turns out right
I love you with all my might
Wake up, I want to see you
From the moment the sun begins to rise
Until the moon shines high at night
Right before I close my eyes
Wake up, I want to hear you now
From the moment you're way too loud
Until you barely make a sound
I'd cry for you
Lie for you
Die for you
Yeah, I'd dream for you
Scream for you
Bleed for you
Wake up, I want to feel you
Feel your arms around my back
And the way it feels to hold you....
*SMACK!*
What? You think that I'm that dumb?
To go along with what you say
When you tell me I'm "The One"?
Really? You didn't think I knew
That you've been lying to me?
Come on, tell me it's not true!
Huh? I didn't hear you babe
You really thought this was just fun & games?
Maybe that's the reason I knew
You were acting strange
Ha! Oh I see, you just made a joke?
Wait, you really just said that?!
I'm not the one to try to provoke
Please fool, don't make me laugh
Because, you see, you have no heart
It's really as simple as that
Hold on. Oh, you're gonna love this!
See, surprise, I found you out
Now you'll wish you didn't exist
The hell?? You're really talking about Cupid?
Hell hath no fury like a woman
You must really think I'm stupid
So I'm not the girl you once knew?
I guess you really never knew me
I'll tell you something that's true
Because that thing you claim is a heart
Is about to get really truly
Fucking torn apart
Yeah, literally with my very own hands
I'll watch you bleed mother fucker
That's how this story really ends
Who's next? Come play games with me
Karma's a bitch, like I can be
I dare you to try, because then you'll see
If you ever want to hurt me, stop
Just leave, walk away, and don't look back
Don't look back unless it turns out right
I love you with all my might
Wake up, I want to see you
From the moment the sun begins to rise
Until the moon shines high at night
Right before I close my eyes
Wake up, I want to hear you now
From the moment you're way too loud
Until you barely make a sound
I'd cry for you
Lie for you
Die for you
Yeah, I'd dream for you
Scream for you
Bleed for you
Wake up, I want to feel you
Feel your arms around my back
And the way it feels to hold you....
*SMACK!*
What? You think that I'm that dumb?
To go along with what you say
When you tell me I'm "The One"?
Really? You didn't think I knew
That you've been lying to me?
Come on, tell me it's not true!
Huh? I didn't hear you babe
You really thought this was just fun & games?
Maybe that's the reason I knew
You were acting strange
Ha! Oh I see, you just made a joke?
Wait, you really just said that?!
I'm not the one to try to provoke
Please fool, don't make me laugh
Because, you see, you have no heart
It's really as simple as that
Hold on. Oh, you're gonna love this!
See, surprise, I found you out
Now you'll wish you didn't exist
The hell?? You're really talking about Cupid?
Hell hath no fury like a woman
You must really think I'm stupid
So I'm not the girl you once knew?
I guess you really never knew me
I'll tell you something that's true
Because that thing you claim is a heart
Is about to get really truly
Fucking torn apart
Yeah, literally with my very own hands
I'll watch you bleed mother fucker
That's how this story really ends
Who's next? Come play games with me
Karma's a bitch, like I can be
I dare you to try, because then you'll see
If you ever want to hurt me, stop
Just leave, walk away, and don't look back
wallyroo92
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Tyrant of Words
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Joined 11th July 2012Forum Posts: 1875
The Road Behind
Don’t look back, the road behind is closed and finished,
You cannot go back to the past, it’s not permitted,
To try to change the things that made you today.
Don’t lose track, of the goals and objectives still in your plan,
Even at times when you’ve wavered and dithered,
Make sure to keep your eyes on the prize ahead.
Don’t you backtrack, retracing your course won’t do you good,
Learn from your mistakes, you’ll catch some of the breaks,
So long as you discover your purpose and keep going.
You’ll experience setbacks, life is full of obstacles and challenges,
But there is always something to ascertain,
So long as you remain firm and determined.
And no matter how many times you’re beaten or trodden,
Have the will and the drive to always get up,
Have the courage to get yourself there,
But damn it please, don’t look back.
Don’t look back, the road behind is closed and finished,
You cannot go back to the past, it’s not permitted,
To try to change the things that made you today.
Don’t lose track, of the goals and objectives still in your plan,
Even at times when you’ve wavered and dithered,
Make sure to keep your eyes on the prize ahead.
Don’t you backtrack, retracing your course won’t do you good,
Learn from your mistakes, you’ll catch some of the breaks,
So long as you discover your purpose and keep going.
You’ll experience setbacks, life is full of obstacles and challenges,
But there is always something to ascertain,
So long as you remain firm and determined.
And no matter how many times you’re beaten or trodden,
Have the will and the drive to always get up,
Have the courage to get yourself there,
But damn it please, don’t look back.
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eswaller
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Dangerous Mind
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No Going Back
Do not look back to the road
And the people you left behind.
They have doubted and slowed
You down. They will remind
You of a past you do not want
To go back to no matter how
You try to move ahead and haunt
You like ghosts. They always vow
And promise to change, but
They never do. That is why
When you are in a huge rut
To never look them in the eye
Because they will suck you in
And they will bring you off track.
Remember you have already been
There before. Do not look back.
And the people you left behind.
They have doubted and slowed
You down. They will remind
You of a past you do not want
To go back to no matter how
You try to move ahead and haunt
You like ghosts. They always vow
And promise to change, but
They never do. That is why
When you are in a huge rut
To never look them in the eye
Because they will suck you in
And they will bring you off track.
Remember you have already been
There before. Do not look back.
Written by eswaller
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drone
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Joined 3rd Sep 2011 Forum Posts: 2277
Do not
look back
when you begin
on this path
of becoming aware
do not
look back
on all
those things
that you know
deep down
were never really there
do not
look back
on plastic facts
that beg you
to come back
for if you want
to know the truth
don't look
back
look back
when you begin
on this path
of becoming aware
do not
look back
on all
those things
that you know
deep down
were never really there
do not
look back
on plastic facts
that beg you
to come back
for if you want
to know the truth
don't look
back
Anonymous
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Hakeemkolathur
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Strange Creature
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Gud
Grace
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IDryad
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Poetryman
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"Don't Look Back"
Don't look back at the broken looking glass
Forget the sadness of the distant past
That used to reflect who you never wanted to be
That shattered image was never your reality
Look to horizons you have never traversed
Or you'll repeat the cycle when your path is reversed
Crossing the finish line will lead to a renewing start
Over the fences that kept us light-years apart
Ignore the echoes you hear calling you back
The song of sirens tempts you into the cracks
Between shards from the mirror beguiling your eyes
That had you believing in their envious lies
You're so much more than the broken spirit you were
You no longer need to feel damaged and insecure
Allow me to be the bridge where you lay down your track
Let go of the ghost, reach out to me and don't look back
JJ
Don't look back at the broken looking glass
Forget the sadness of the distant past
That used to reflect who you never wanted to be
That shattered image was never your reality
Look to horizons you have never traversed
Or you'll repeat the cycle when your path is reversed
Crossing the finish line will lead to a renewing start
Over the fences that kept us light-years apart
Ignore the echoes you hear calling you back
The song of sirens tempts you into the cracks
Between shards from the mirror beguiling your eyes
That had you believing in their envious lies
You're so much more than the broken spirit you were
You no longer need to feel damaged and insecure
Allow me to be the bridge where you lay down your track
Let go of the ghost, reach out to me and don't look back
JJ
OxyMoronicMe
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Congratulations JJ
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Thank you Wanderer, I am humbled!
And thank you Oxy!
JJ
And thank you Oxy!
JJ