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define these lyrics

666gothchick
Paulina Dionne
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Poetry Contest

A competition to interpret the lyrics of the Cradle Of Filth song Nymphetamine.
so here's the deal i want you to give me a definition of this song
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=6dW6aNAZGTM
the best definition will win! i'll pick a winner on the 2nd of july
please ask for lyrics if your struggling!

666gothchick
Paulina Dionne
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awww come on people it's not that hard , please it's my first competition iv'e started, give me a chance!

lepperochan
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its hard to hear the lyrics 666 can you stick them up?

666gothchick
Paulina Dionne
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Laid to the river
Midsummer, I waved
A "V" of black swans
On with hope to the grave
And though Red September
With skies fire-paved
I begged you appear
Like a thorn for the holy ones

Cold was my soul
Untold was the pain
I faced when you left me
A rose in the rain....
So I swore to the razor
That never, enchained
Would your dark nails of faith
Be pushed through my veins again

Bared on your tomb
I'm a prayer for your loneliness
And would you ever soon
Come above onto me?
For once upon a time
On the binds of your loneliness
I could always find the right slot for your sacred key

Six feet deep is the incision
In my heart, that barless prison
Discoulours all with tunnel vision

Sunsetter...
Nymphetamine

Sick and weak from my condition
This lust, this vampyric addiction
To Her alone in full submission

None better...
Nymphetamine

Nymphetamine, Nymphetamine...
Nymphetamine girl.

Nymphetamine, Nymphetamine...
My Nymphetamine girl.

Wicked with your charm
I'm circled like prey
Back in the forest
Were whispers persuade
More sugar trails
More white lady laid
Than pillars of salt...
(keeping Sodom at at bay)

Fold to my arms
Hold their mesmeric sway
And dance out to the moon
As we did in those golden days

Christening stars
I remember the way
We were needle and spoon
Mislaid in the burning hay

Bared on your tomb
I'm a prayer for your loneliness
And would you ever soon
Come above onto me?
For once upon a time
On the binds of your loneliness
I could always find the right slot for your sacred key

Six feet deep is the incision
In my heart, that barless prison
Discoulours all with tunnel vision

Sunsetter...
Nymphetamine

Sick and weak from my condition
This lust, this vampyric addiction
To Her alone in full submission

None better...
Nymphetamine

Nymphetamine, Nymphetamine...
Nymphetamine girl.

Nymphetamine, Nymphetamine...
My Nymphetamine girl

here ya go , i know dani's screeching is hard to hear, still a beautiful song!

lepperochan
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i am going to go out on a limb here and say that he lost his girl friend,who he banged up with in the hay under the stars, and cuts himself with a razor on his loved ones grave.Nymphetamine i think would represent his addiction to a mixture of her,pain and drugs.  
close?

666gothchick
Paulina Dionne
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hmmm interesting i'll tell you on the 2nd of july- thanks for having a go

poet Anonymous

To me, this song is very much about addiction. The pain of having somebody so close to you that you can't even express it anymore. Revelling in the memories. Revelling in the scents of the past. My Nymphetamine will always be the one who cures my pain.

bastardofbodom666
Helvete Blod
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omg this was my exes and I's song...... she would do the female vocals and i would do the male...

666gothchick
Paulina Dionne
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thanks a nice little definition there it's nice to see people taking part (hint hint where is everybody else?!)

bastardofbodom666
Helvete Blod
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ok well to me its about two lovers... well ex lovers and while together they caused each other's self desctruction... just as me and Kitty did

rayheinrich
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[font=Courier New][size=2]
 Definition: Boringly bad destructive love ballad #104289736298437287.

666gothchick
Paulina Dionne
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if you think this is boring then piss off

poet Anonymous

[quote]no pun intended said:
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 Definition: Boringly bad destructive love ballad #104289736298437287.


This is definitely the best reply thus far, one I agree with too.


How can you "define" lyrics? Shouldn't they be interpreted or analysed rather than "defined"?

666gothchick
Paulina Dionne
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if your not going to take part in this properly then go away

poet Anonymous

Why would people want to stamp on somebody's idea? I thought this was free ideas forum? There's no need to piss on somebody else for trying to get involved.

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