Poetry competition CLOSED 2nd August 2016 5:36pm
WINNER
Too_hot69 (BelindaSnow)
Too_hot69 (BelindaSnow)
What’s your FETISH?
I have to be honest, MotDi. Of all the writes yours garnered the most conflicting opinions. They're were some that found it disturbing, while others found it a refreshing perspective on the oldest profession.
Personally I found it to be a deep honest introspective look into yourself. Thank you for sharing your soul with us.
Personally I found it to be a deep honest introspective look into yourself. Thank you for sharing your soul with us.
Jade, of your two writes my group liked Queen Bee the most. More than one admired your poetry skills. One woman in my group commented that your work brought back memories of a bugged and recorded conversation between Prince Charles and Camilla Parker Bowels. In which he expressed his desire to become her tampon. She’d like to know if your write was inspired by it.
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berea440oh, I guess they don’t call it a laptop for nothing. Several members of my group commented how they loved the descending structure of berea’s poem. The conversation continued to how we admire a poet like berea400oh, who isn’t afraid to try new or different forms of poetry.
A lot of people from my poetry group loved robolantern13 work. They admired its internal rhyme style, and it’s hardboiled rhythm. However, many wished robolatern had addressed a particular fetish. A couple of folks commented his work was about regular sex. I couldn’t help but laugh at their comments. Back in my leisure suit days this would have been considered anything but a discription about ‘regular sex.’ Such a poem may have gotten the poet arrested.
Toni, your Driving with Sam really captured the sense of erotic fear. It made me, the reader, appreciate the danger of liaison and it’s results to both the body and mind. Of all the poems I presented to my group, yours was by far the most provocative. I say this not because it caused discussion, but by the way it left so many people speechless. Your work took a very original approach that makes people think.
Thank you for sharing your experience with us.
Thank you for sharing your experience with us.
My group found your contributions enjoyable. As the sponsor of this competition I refrained from voting. After a poll of all the members, it was agreed, that Too_hot69's poem was the best. I questioned their decision as though I found it a fun write I didn't think it addressed a particular fetish. But one member said that 'heavy petting' is a fetish. And for the sake of foreplay, it needs to be explored by people more. So congrats to Too_hot69.
Thank you, Host Kim and your group who participated in the vote, and your encouraging and special notes about my entry QUEEN BEE, and my word craft, I'm honored. With sincerest appreciation for that and the opportunity!
And I offer my congratulations to the cup recipient, Too_hot69!
Oh and one more thing, Kim, I never thought about the Prince Charles - Camilla Parker Bowles conversation which I'd forgotten all about till you brought it up. It's an erotic reminder how people of all walks entertain the sexuality of a woman's cycle.
With my best,
ever
Jade
And I offer my congratulations to the cup recipient, Too_hot69!
Oh and one more thing, Kim, I never thought about the Prince Charles - Camilla Parker Bowles conversation which I'd forgotten all about till you brought it up. It's an erotic reminder how people of all walks entertain the sexuality of a woman's cycle.
With my best,
ever
Jade
To snugglebuck and group - deeply appreciate the kind words and feedback - really enjoyed the competition -
and congratulations to Too_hot69 for the wonderful write -
And to all who shared their words and predilections - exhilarating writes - thanks!
and congratulations to Too_hot69 for the wonderful write -
And to all who shared their words and predilections - exhilarating writes - thanks!
Anonymous
Great competition and some amazing ink, Congratulations Too_Hot69 well done and well deserved. I enjoyed reading all of the peoms and many thanx snugglebuck for feed back on the poems and to your poetry group.
