Let your mind run wild!
Nicolassy
Joined 23rd Apr 2016
Forum Posts: 27
Lost Thinker
Forum Posts: 27
Poetry Contest Description
I'm new here and wish to get inside the head of other members via any story/poem of their choosing they wish to share.
It can be an old story/poem you've written in the past, or new.
With competition comes a reward, not sure how to give one out.
Let creativity flourish!
With competition comes a reward, not sure how to give one out.
Let creativity flourish!
Trixareforkids
Forum Posts: 2597
Dangerous Mind
6
Joined 2nd Jan 2016Forum Posts: 2597
Entry removed
Nicolassy
Joined 23rd Apr 2016
Forum Posts: 27
Lost Thinker
Forum Posts: 27
Sounds like a deep battle from within. May you find an escape from it. Thank you for your story.
_shadoe_
yiyi
Forum Posts: 577
yiyi
Tyrant of Words
54
Joined 25th Apr 2013Forum Posts: 577
consort of ashes ~
you paint orchids
beneath
my eyes
& tap tears
from
their quivering mouths ~
... i w[h]et
your savagery
with
severed fingers
pressed to
featureless faces
trying in vain
to
fill my veins
with intangibles
that pass by
mismatched hands ...
*
we carved
numerals on
copper coin sundials
& watched
days pass
like mirages rising
from their warmth ~
... you were
rowan [&] ash
set to flame
where
they stood
rooted in
my marrow
to leave me
a waste land of
[empty]
embers ...
*
& I burned,
daddy
before you
licked your fingers
to
snuff the light
in my eyes ~
... just another
elemental nothing
waiting for
fleeting breaths from
your steel
& clover lips
just another
consort for
a con artist
perfecting his skills...
//
you paint orchids
beneath
my eyes
& tap tears
from
their quivering mouths ~
... i w[h]et
your savagery
with
severed fingers
pressed to
featureless faces
trying in vain
to
fill my veins
with intangibles
that pass by
mismatched hands ...
*
we carved
numerals on
copper coin sundials
& watched
days pass
like mirages rising
from their warmth ~
... you were
rowan [&] ash
set to flame
where
they stood
rooted in
my marrow
to leave me
a waste land of
[empty]
embers ...
*
& I burned,
daddy
before you
licked your fingers
to
snuff the light
in my eyes ~
... just another
elemental nothing
waiting for
fleeting breaths from
your steel
& clover lips
just another
consort for
a con artist
perfecting his skills...
//
crimsin
Unveiling
Forum Posts: 2661
Unveiling
Tyrant of Words
126
Joined 25th Jan 2011 Forum Posts: 2661
The Streets
I was thrown to the streets
for being a momma
at the age of fifteen.
Not street wise by any means
over protected
by parents who thought this was wisdom.
The first year I moved twenty five times
it was always the same
house slave or some man's play thing.
Staying in homeless shelters
I met people long on the streets
I was intrigued.
For the first time free
from the wrath of my father
I wanted to get lost in the land of the forgotten.
Smoking pcp was my first intoduction
to the bliss of the numb
I could finally forget the shame
my parents said I had become.
Sleeping all day
running the streets at night
cruising with the cholos and cholas, I was having fun
I finally had a family that accepted me
getting high and fucking who ever I chose indiscriminately .
The pain that stuck
no one wanted to stay around for long
they were young and didn't need a girl with a baby
that's when I first met Jimmy
still reeling from the pain
I felt at the rejection of my family.
He talked of soul mates and mojo
A Native American
I loved him from day one.
He introduced me to banana splits and heroin
in his arms I finally felt peace
he was a warrior, street wise
he kept the wolves from me.
He taught me the art of short changing
buying fast food
and then saying they gave him the wrong change
the food would pile up
Jimmy would pull over and feed the homeless.
We lived from motel to motel
ripping and running
soon Jimmy and I had started doing burglaries
to feed our hungry habit
after awhile the cops were looking for us
we had become notorious.
At the end of the day
we would slam our dope
knowing our time was growing short.
When the detectives caught up with us
Jimmy took all the blame
and was put on the news for being infamous.
Thirteen years was his sentence
he's still in prison to this day
he keeps getting new beefs
because he is a fighter
and never does what the cops say.
I owe him my freedom for taking the blame
i'm clean now, while Jimmy remains in chains
I wish for him to get out some day
and be free from prison and drugs
I owe him my life though he introduced me to heroin
he kept me alive when I just wanted to die.
I was thrown to the streets
for being a momma
at the age of fifteen.
Not street wise by any means
over protected
by parents who thought this was wisdom.
The first year I moved twenty five times
it was always the same
house slave or some man's play thing.
Staying in homeless shelters
I met people long on the streets
I was intrigued.
For the first time free
from the wrath of my father
I wanted to get lost in the land of the forgotten.
Smoking pcp was my first intoduction
to the bliss of the numb
I could finally forget the shame
my parents said I had become.
Sleeping all day
running the streets at night
cruising with the cholos and cholas, I was having fun
I finally had a family that accepted me
getting high and fucking who ever I chose indiscriminately .
The pain that stuck
no one wanted to stay around for long
they were young and didn't need a girl with a baby
that's when I first met Jimmy
still reeling from the pain
I felt at the rejection of my family.
He talked of soul mates and mojo
A Native American
I loved him from day one.
He introduced me to banana splits and heroin
in his arms I finally felt peace
he was a warrior, street wise
he kept the wolves from me.
He taught me the art of short changing
buying fast food
and then saying they gave him the wrong change
the food would pile up
Jimmy would pull over and feed the homeless.
We lived from motel to motel
ripping and running
soon Jimmy and I had started doing burglaries
to feed our hungry habit
after awhile the cops were looking for us
we had become notorious.
At the end of the day
we would slam our dope
knowing our time was growing short.
When the detectives caught up with us
Jimmy took all the blame
and was put on the news for being infamous.
Thirteen years was his sentence
he's still in prison to this day
he keeps getting new beefs
because he is a fighter
and never does what the cops say.
I owe him my freedom for taking the blame
i'm clean now, while Jimmy remains in chains
I wish for him to get out some day
and be free from prison and drugs
I owe him my life though he introduced me to heroin
he kept me alive when I just wanted to die.
Nicolassy
Joined 23rd Apr 2016
Forum Posts: 27
Lost Thinker
Forum Posts: 27
Thank you both! These are all a real joy to read.
lepperochan
Craic-Dealer
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Craic-Dealer
Guardian of Shadows
67
Joined 1st Apr 2011Forum Posts: 14572
Chic flick
and to be fair, your honour
it wasn't my fault about the chicken
it had black rings around it's eyes
so I called an emo
it fell from its feathers
and boned itself
I swear, your honour
there was nothing to be done
for saving it
...........................
you tell a good tale, kid
but said nothing
to disuade the court
from foul play
and furthermore
not a single explanation
as regards the farmer
..who's chicken died
at the hands of your toungue
locked in his barn
with gospel music
blasted
through the Windows
so the court feels
you can no longer serve
the wheels and cogs
of society
so hereby
sentence you
to life
on the outside
no question of parole
Edit: terribly sorry, picked up the "let your mind run wild " and ran with it. I'll leave it here anyway rather than kill it
and to be fair, your honour
it wasn't my fault about the chicken
it had black rings around it's eyes
so I called an emo
it fell from its feathers
and boned itself
I swear, your honour
there was nothing to be done
for saving it
...........................
you tell a good tale, kid
but said nothing
to disuade the court
from foul play
and furthermore
not a single explanation
as regards the farmer
..who's chicken died
at the hands of your toungue
locked in his barn
with gospel music
blasted
through the Windows
so the court feels
you can no longer serve
the wheels and cogs
of society
so hereby
sentence you
to life
on the outside
no question of parole
Edit: terribly sorry, picked up the "let your mind run wild " and ran with it. I'll leave it here anyway rather than kill it
Nicolassy
Joined 23rd Apr 2016
Forum Posts: 27
Lost Thinker
Forum Posts: 27
Thank you for your story!
calamitygin
Jennifer Michael McCurry
Forum Posts: 2047
Jennifer Michael McCurry
Tyrant of Words
28
Joined 22nd June 2015Forum Posts: 2047
Giver Man
Gillian Welch lyrics Elvis Presley Blues
Was thinking that night about Elvis
Day that he died, day that he died
I was thinking that night about Elvis
Day that he died, day that he died
Just a country boy that combed his hair
And put on a shirt his mother made and went on the air
And he shook it like a chorus girl
And he shook it like a Harlem Queen
He shook it like a midnight rambler, baby
Like you never seen, like you never seen, never seen
""""""""""""""""""""""""""""""""""""""""""""""
I go to the well..its empty..its empty..
Im so thirsty..
So thirsty
I could just cry.
Dirt roads they jes seem endless baby..endless..
Suffer me
Ain another house for a mile.
Baby so lonesome i could die..
Skies above are open wide..wide
Like Dangerous thought
Consuming,
Looming
And use you to poor Whip or Wills haunted calls of time.
But sweet summer time brings lightnin bugs..fire flies time flies
Through lil gals rare giggles of freedom
And the river, he waves Hello..
You thought he was friendly then the rains came, rain poured
He roared and sucked you under his bridge
Right under that ridge where your house sat..
Home
The roar became your music, sweet music..
A woman in your skinny dip, he licked
And he knew
He pulled you back under, under
Whispers..i am so sorry Jennifer..
My love how you've grown...
When the water understands your secret, he keeps it
Never another dry well..
No thirsty
No alone.
Miles away, pass days by daze
You forget
That ol man, my ol man..
He groans..
As you fly high in a new world...
You shake what he owned.
Lover river..my sweet giver man...
Please forgive me..
You delivered me..
From my wretched dry home.
https://m.youtube.com/watch?v=7FM8ui2ByUI
Gillian Welch lyrics Elvis Presley Blues
Was thinking that night about Elvis
Day that he died, day that he died
I was thinking that night about Elvis
Day that he died, day that he died
Just a country boy that combed his hair
And put on a shirt his mother made and went on the air
And he shook it like a chorus girl
And he shook it like a Harlem Queen
He shook it like a midnight rambler, baby
Like you never seen, like you never seen, never seen
""""""""""""""""""""""""""""""""""""""""""""""
I go to the well..its empty..its empty..
Im so thirsty..
So thirsty
I could just cry.
Dirt roads they jes seem endless baby..endless..
Suffer me
Ain another house for a mile.
Baby so lonesome i could die..
Skies above are open wide..wide
Like Dangerous thought
Consuming,
Looming
And use you to poor Whip or Wills haunted calls of time.
But sweet summer time brings lightnin bugs..fire flies time flies
Through lil gals rare giggles of freedom
And the river, he waves Hello..
You thought he was friendly then the rains came, rain poured
He roared and sucked you under his bridge
Right under that ridge where your house sat..
Home
The roar became your music, sweet music..
A woman in your skinny dip, he licked
And he knew
He pulled you back under, under
Whispers..i am so sorry Jennifer..
My love how you've grown...
When the water understands your secret, he keeps it
Never another dry well..
No thirsty
No alone.
Miles away, pass days by daze
You forget
That ol man, my ol man..
He groans..
As you fly high in a new world...
You shake what he owned.
Lover river..my sweet giver man...
Please forgive me..
You delivered me..
From my wretched dry home.
https://m.youtube.com/watch?v=7FM8ui2ByUI
calamitygin
Jennifer Michael McCurry
Forum Posts: 2047
Jennifer Michael McCurry
Tyrant of Words
28
Joined 22nd June 2015Forum Posts: 2047
Matter over mind and the red deep under
And it starts a flame
incendiery dust roused by a crazed eyed demagogue
as his words rage
become
tongues of feral fire that cannot be taken back
they haunt
haunt you until
taunted by this harsh Sun your lips blister
you pray for rain
it starts a trickle
and noisy gossip babbles a brook
you cannot resist a placating dip of ONLY toes ONLY to cool your feet
till it hurts as you are pulled in all in harsh wet wet currents of bad medicine
suck you under sweep you down
and it floods your wholeness
and you feel the drown ..
self esteem screams for air
you are soaked unworthy
unworthy of even an Angels touch
and dust seems the only place
ash seems logical end
dry please oh God!
no more than a sip of need....
just a sip...then oh please oh God....
and years you wander through
wander lust
scorched wilderness wanting
a coward
again
you pray for rain
and it pours days and days
of course...
and you mix it all into muddy redemption
words hurt...bleed
the foul air people expell so willingly
glad words of pseudo triumph
uncaring that that the people
breathing their toxic air ..
might be hurting like Perpetua..
she in martyrdom..
you in vengeance...
might be close
so close
to woman on the verge
or close to divine purpose
Ever expell toxic air?
i have
Ever thrown words that can yes could kill?
i have
Ever try to rescue the ones you almost drown?
i have
Ever been proud of the hurting....
I have not
and all mix in muddy bloody redemption..
wrists slit and the deep slice...
feeels nice...
the drip
pretty
spot to dream swirl
to stream of red ease....
as dream swirls haze eyes...
under, 6 feet, so close to the cold covered covered soggy red under
wish i brought my favorite blanket
and teddy bear....
Written by calamitygin (Jennifer Michael McCurry)
And it starts a flame
incendiery dust roused by a crazed eyed demagogue
as his words rage
become
tongues of feral fire that cannot be taken back
they haunt
haunt you until
taunted by this harsh Sun your lips blister
you pray for rain
it starts a trickle
and noisy gossip babbles a brook
you cannot resist a placating dip of ONLY toes ONLY to cool your feet
till it hurts as you are pulled in all in harsh wet wet currents of bad medicine
suck you under sweep you down
and it floods your wholeness
and you feel the drown ..
self esteem screams for air
you are soaked unworthy
unworthy of even an Angels touch
and dust seems the only place
ash seems logical end
dry please oh God!
no more than a sip of need....
just a sip...then oh please oh God....
and years you wander through
wander lust
scorched wilderness wanting
a coward
again
you pray for rain
and it pours days and days
of course...
and you mix it all into muddy redemption
words hurt...bleed
the foul air people expell so willingly
glad words of pseudo triumph
uncaring that that the people
breathing their toxic air ..
might be hurting like Perpetua..
she in martyrdom..
you in vengeance...
might be close
so close
to woman on the verge
or close to divine purpose
Ever expell toxic air?
i have
Ever thrown words that can yes could kill?
i have
Ever try to rescue the ones you almost drown?
i have
Ever been proud of the hurting....
I have not
and all mix in muddy bloody redemption..
wrists slit and the deep slice...
feeels nice...
the drip
pretty
spot to dream swirl
to stream of red ease....
as dream swirls haze eyes...
under, 6 feet, so close to the cold covered covered soggy red under
wish i brought my favorite blanket
and teddy bear....
Written by calamitygin (Jennifer Michael McCurry)
calamitygin
Jennifer Michael McCurry
Forum Posts: 2047
Jennifer Michael McCurry
Tyrant of Words
28
Joined 22nd June 2015Forum Posts: 2047
Great avatar...and welcome.
Nicolassy
Joined 23rd Apr 2016
Forum Posts: 27
Lost Thinker
Forum Posts: 27
Thank you for the greetings and thank you for your read!
russiamagda
Forum Posts: 83
Twisted Dreamer
4
Joined 20th Mar 2016 Forum Posts: 83
clench
the corners of my eyes squint open
struggling to process each word i didn't want to hear
i could've told them to stop
but i let them continue
i push my wrists, boney back under my sleeves
my clenched knuckles into a fist
as i was holding something i was attempting to not release
i greet my anger once again
later on, i go back into bed
greet my pencil again
and write the words on my thin lined paper
angrily, turning moments to words
my teeth clench, as i hold back all the words i refused to releass from my lips. pale and fragile, crinkling from each expression i've refused to let out
i swoon my neck, then gradually my head against the silky cold pillow
and pour it out from my eyes
but no one's eyes rotate when i hide behind my sheets
and tomorrow, i repeat
the corners of my eyes squint open
struggling to process each word i didn't want to hear
i could've told them to stop
but i let them continue
i push my wrists, boney back under my sleeves
my clenched knuckles into a fist
as i was holding something i was attempting to not release
i greet my anger once again
later on, i go back into bed
greet my pencil again
and write the words on my thin lined paper
angrily, turning moments to words
my teeth clench, as i hold back all the words i refused to releass from my lips. pale and fragile, crinkling from each expression i've refused to let out
i swoon my neck, then gradually my head against the silky cold pillow
and pour it out from my eyes
but no one's eyes rotate when i hide behind my sheets
and tomorrow, i repeat
Nicolassy
Joined 23rd Apr 2016
Forum Posts: 27
Lost Thinker
Forum Posts: 27
Danke for the read!
headlight_eyes
Joined 25th Apr 2016
Forum Posts: 56
Lost Thinker
Forum Posts: 56
the age or the people ? x
harsh truths bit like mosquitos;
constant and always itching /
in the back of my mind
(or on the side of my leg)
perhaps,
there was a sigh from us all,
relief ?? or just to take another breath in
and exhale the next lie
my, my,
my mother's mother's mother
might just cry with the state
of us these days
and the length of our skirt
((or perhaps, lack of))
the sensible are confused
all the time
because nothing quite makes sense,
our minds warping to get out of the way
of the fragile future.
what a time.
harsh truths bit like mosquitos;
constant and always itching /
in the back of my mind
(or on the side of my leg)
perhaps,
there was a sigh from us all,
relief ?? or just to take another breath in
and exhale the next lie
my, my,
my mother's mother's mother
might just cry with the state
of us these days
and the length of our skirt
((or perhaps, lack of))
the sensible are confused
all the time
because nothing quite makes sense,
our minds warping to get out of the way
of the fragile future.
what a time.