Border-Line Personality
Jonjon10
Joined 19th Dec 2010
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Lost Thinker
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Poetry Contest Description
borderline Experience
I Apologize, yes, poetic experience on borderline personality , use descriptive examples of symptoms of the Disorder . No names . Just make the reader understand the mind of the Border line. Thank ya'll so much
Jade-Pandora
jade tiger
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jade tiger
Tyrant of Words
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Hi Jon. Can you give us more information about the competition, please, like any rules, and outline of the theme, and perhaps a sample of what you expect. Thanks!
calamitygin
Jennifer Michael McCurry
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Jennifer Michael McCurry
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Yes darlin..please..
archetype23
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I will work on this one. Thank you for the seed of inspiration
archetype23
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To Hyde within
I see you there staring at me
A hungry beast awaiting release
The simple click of the latch to open the hatch
One simple motion of shifting emotion
And I will be Dead And you will be free
Alive now to look back deep into me
We will see as I sip on a little more potion
....OH, yes, We will see....
I see you there staring at me
A hungry beast awaiting release
The simple click of the latch to open the hatch
One simple motion of shifting emotion
And I will be Dead And you will be free
Alive now to look back deep into me
We will see as I sip on a little more potion
....OH, yes, We will see....
TinaLouise
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Twisted Dreamer
3
Joined 20th Dec 2015Forum Posts: 89
Unicorns are real
Oh dear! the car just stopped dead
no service or a soul anywhere insight
I got plenty of water and smokes
Yippee George just appeared to my right
I thought that she had left me
hadn't heard from her for a while
She doesn't do depression
it's just not her style
every car truck van and bus waved
one lady drove by twice!
You see Trendsetters
people on the cape are so damn nice
I sent a message to Cooktown
hopefully help is on it's way
togs on sprawled across the bonnet 8am
what a beautiful sunny day!
It's only been 3 hours so far; Meh! I'm ok
George is restless, annoyed and bound to have her say
Nek Minnut
"You no-good piece of crap
we're miles from a town
I'll set ya on fire & roll you upside"
"OMG! George please calm down"
It's always entertaining when George is by my side
I think I'll kick depression
Gun shot is where she'll ride
she's always been there with me
from the day that I was born
10ft tall warrior princess upon a unicorn
She takes nonsense from no-one
answers only to herself
she is a street fighting survivor
she is the meaning of stealth
Happy to have you home George
my fiancé will be too
its no great secret that
he fell in love with you
He thought my name was George
my secret friend, protector,
me George & I
for the gambling man
we're a winning Trifecta!
At least I have pen and paper
to keep me sane, poor twisted George
she's doing cartwheels in my brain
"It's been four hours in this heat;
I'm 'Stinking
why didn't you get a lift but no you
stayed with the car
what the hell were you thinking?"
I'd better turn the music on
to drown this psycho out
so a little bit of Pitbull and
I can't hear her shout
Written by TinaLouise
Oh dear! the car just stopped dead
no service or a soul anywhere insight
I got plenty of water and smokes
Yippee George just appeared to my right
I thought that she had left me
hadn't heard from her for a while
She doesn't do depression
it's just not her style
every car truck van and bus waved
one lady drove by twice!
You see Trendsetters
people on the cape are so damn nice
I sent a message to Cooktown
hopefully help is on it's way
togs on sprawled across the bonnet 8am
what a beautiful sunny day!
It's only been 3 hours so far; Meh! I'm ok
George is restless, annoyed and bound to have her say
Nek Minnut
"You no-good piece of crap
we're miles from a town
I'll set ya on fire & roll you upside"
"OMG! George please calm down"
It's always entertaining when George is by my side
I think I'll kick depression
Gun shot is where she'll ride
she's always been there with me
from the day that I was born
10ft tall warrior princess upon a unicorn
She takes nonsense from no-one
answers only to herself
she is a street fighting survivor
she is the meaning of stealth
Happy to have you home George
my fiancé will be too
its no great secret that
he fell in love with you
He thought my name was George
my secret friend, protector,
me George & I
for the gambling man
we're a winning Trifecta!
At least I have pen and paper
to keep me sane, poor twisted George
she's doing cartwheels in my brain
"It's been four hours in this heat;
I'm 'Stinking
why didn't you get a lift but no you
stayed with the car
what the hell were you thinking?"
I'd better turn the music on
to drown this psycho out
so a little bit of Pitbull and
I can't hear her shout
Written by TinaLouise
calamitygin
Jennifer Michael McCurry
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Jennifer Michael McCurry
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A fueled change? Of geneolgy..Run Amuk
One minute me
Next another
Of different proportions
Distortion by chemical release
Fuels my beast
Makes me your burden
And am I worth it?
I ask of you..?
Torn..?
Well now..
Let us look back to birth..
The sweet gal i am..mostly
And the hell bitch i can be
At my worst..
The few that love me unconditionally as i am and at the smallest i will undoubtfully
...... become....
When, and i will, become undone
I gratefully embrace
For seeing this quick change artists
True face
As they say..
(who the fuck are they any fucking way?)
Baby..i was born this way....
And doll..are you as goood as it gets?
If so..hoh lee fuck eeen um.."shet?"
For lack of a "normal" rhyming word...
One minute me
Next another
Of different proportions
Distortion by chemical release
Fuels my beast
Makes me your burden
And am I worth it?
I ask of you..?
Torn..?
Well now..
Let us look back to birth..
The sweet gal i am..mostly
And the hell bitch i can be
At my worst..
The few that love me unconditionally as i am and at the smallest i will undoubtfully
...... become....
When, and i will, become undone
I gratefully embrace
For seeing this quick change artists
True face
As they say..
(who the fuck are they any fucking way?)
Baby..i was born this way....
And doll..are you as goood as it gets?
If so..hoh lee fuck eeen um.."shet?"
For lack of a "normal" rhyming word...
calamitygin
Jennifer Michael McCurry
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Jennifer Michael McCurry
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Nek Minute! Back lady louise! Lol love your pen! Geeeeoorge! Think i know that haggard..😍🔫 awesome..knew i knew you ..from oceans sway..
Allowed me to take my leap of face..lol
Allowed me to take my leap of face..lol
Trixareforkids
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Dangerous Mind
6
Joined 2nd Jan 2016Forum Posts: 2597
Reunited and It Feels So Good
Hidden in the corner
Of a room without door
My monster claws at shadows
Making patterns on the floor
Its telltale heart still beats
A quiet sad refrain
Come closer come closer
So we can play again
I peer into the mirror
Looking for some kind of sign
And there I see its eyes
Looking back through mine
Now I'm not so certain
Its in that room at all
The only way to know for sure
Is to break down the wall
Curiosity's a killer
I know it to be true
Yet I grab my dusty hammer
And swing it straight on through
Hidden in the corner
Of a room without door
My monster claws at shadows
Making patterns on the floor
Its telltale heart still beats
A quiet sad refrain
Come closer come closer
So we can play again
I peer into the mirror
Looking for some kind of sign
And there I see its eyes
Looking back through mine
Now I'm not so certain
Its in that room at all
The only way to know for sure
Is to break down the wall
Curiosity's a killer
I know it to be true
Yet I grab my dusty hammer
And swing it straight on through
TinaLouise
Forum Posts: 89
Twisted Dreamer
3
Joined 20th Dec 2015Forum Posts: 89
Jus keeping mental health at bay Ms J
hehe! dodging and weaving
I know you see me
T xx
hehe! dodging and weaving
I know you see me
T xx
olympiangods0
Joined 18th Oct 2015
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Strange Creature
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The doors opened inside out
Outside was another irrelevant experience, wait who's there?
As I sat there motionless I noticed someone or something trying to turn the knob on my door open, "who's there" I yelled. A brief knock on the door. Outside was empty there was no one but me. "Ssssssshhhhhhh you hear that? Don't make a sound" "huh? That's strange I could almost swear that I saw a shadow move from under the doors reflection of the light Outside the hall"
Wake up! I am awake who's there? Its me don't you remember me? I'm your doctor. "What are you I don't have a doctor get away from me" em I alone? I'm fine I'm surely not bugging.
I'm tired back to sleep.
Wake up!
"Huh"
Outside was another irrelevant experience, wait who's there?
As I sat there motionless I noticed someone or something trying to turn the knob on my door open, "who's there" I yelled. A brief knock on the door. Outside was empty there was no one but me. "Ssssssshhhhhhh you hear that? Don't make a sound" "huh? That's strange I could almost swear that I saw a shadow move from under the doors reflection of the light Outside the hall"
Wake up! I am awake who's there? Its me don't you remember me? I'm your doctor. "What are you I don't have a doctor get away from me" em I alone? I'm fine I'm surely not bugging.
I'm tired back to sleep.
Wake up!
"Huh"
TinaLouise
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Twisted Dreamer
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Joined 20th Dec 2015Forum Posts: 89
In my mates club dancing like a queen
rum chasing shots, E's, yeah I'm in the scene
music is my life, dance is my release
bitch starts glaring disturbing my inner peace
next thing I know it I'm on the floor
she'd run at me that bitch from before
then I was bounced right out the door
I stood outside waiting anticipating more
I was too drunk to stop George
with this biker whore
George stood in between both pubs
the cop shop on the corner Cooly central hub
On the pedestrian crossing she came toward me
her hand out to shake I took it to precipitate
George snarled and the bitch swung
She was thrown to the ground with 6 knees to her head
George screaming "Don't fuck with me bitch, You're dead"
top ripped open my breast out for all to see
George didn't care about my privacy
she punched and kicked that biker whore
until the bouncers were screaming NO MORE!
Written by TinaLouise
Hepcat61
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geoff cat
Dangerous Mind
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Joined 27th Nov 2015Forum Posts: 1028
Borderline
What the fuck!
How did you get a gun…?
You found it…
Look, no one leaves a Glock just laying around…
In a guy’s car at work?
You know you’re gonna have to take it back?
Hey… dude! That’s not cool…
I don’t care if it’s loaded or not…
NO, that’s not a good way to find out…
DUDE!
FUCK!
What the fuck!
How did you get a gun…?
You found it…
Look, no one leaves a Glock just laying around…
In a guy’s car at work?
You know you’re gonna have to take it back?
Hey… dude! That’s not cool…
I don’t care if it’s loaded or not…
NO, that’s not a good way to find out…
DUDE!
FUCK!
Just_On_My_Way
Joined 23rd Dec 2015
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Lost Thinker
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Chilling
Hepcat61
geoff cat
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geoff cat
Dangerous Mind
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Joined 27th Nov 2015Forum Posts: 1028
If that was directed at my post...
Thank you...
Thank you...