Poetry competition CLOSED 20th June 2011 5:59pm
WINNER
jolais
jolais
fourteen letters seven lines
[quote]Eamon said:
a e i o u t h l m d s c n w
using only the letters above write a seven line poem.
the lies slide out smooth,
so i listen, see, and i watch his mouth
as he winds me thin.
those lies hand his mind to me
tho' sense dismounts and hides;
as usual, i continue to watch
and hold it all in.
a e i o u t h l m d s c n w
using only the letters above write a seven line poem.
the lies slide out smooth,
so i listen, see, and i watch his mouth
as he winds me thin.
those lies hand his mind to me
tho' sense dismounts and hides;
as usual, i continue to watch
and hold it all in.
sort of puts mine to shame jolais
Anonymous
The tide lies low in the south,
slow and ethical,
and my sails will thaw
to douse the thin wind
in lithium.
Sun and moon, document the mood
I hold in my mute sails.
slow and ethical,
and my sails will thaw
to douse the thin wind
in lithium.
Sun and moon, document the mood
I hold in my mute sails.
Anonymous
[quote]Eamon said:
thats really good cori. i was left wanting an "r" but the standard so far is high
Ahah, it was hard! I wanted to sneak an 'r' in pretty badly. Far too many 's's' in my opinion. :]
thats really good cori. i was left wanting an "r" but the standard so far is high
Ahah, it was hard! I wanted to sneak an 'r' in pretty badly. Far too many 's's' in my opinion. :]
