tra'verse': micropoetry
geekslutnerdgirl
Joined 9th July 2011
Forum Posts: 29
Lost Thinker
Forum Posts: 29
rendered by your side
tie my hands behind my back
shut my eyes
you lead me blind
into defenseless
i cannot be
anything, but yours.
tie my hands behind my back
shut my eyes
you lead me blind
into defenseless
i cannot be
anything, but yours.
lepperochan
CraicDealer
Forum Posts: 14592
CraicDealer
Guardian of Shadows
67
Joined 1st Apr 2011Forum Posts: 14592
Spaced out
never really thought about it
until now
how the slightest change
to the chemical balance of the brain
could, in effect
change it's perception
of how the world is happening
maybe tweaked a bit
wound down
or dimmed
never really thought about it
until now
how the slightest change
to the chemical balance of the brain
could, in effect
change it's perception
of how the world is happening
maybe tweaked a bit
wound down
or dimmed
Anonymous
eyes, windows, soul
I stepped inside of you
and watched your storm
infuse against the Heaven's
of your stained glass eyes
right as the straps of your dress
fell beneath your shoulders
did I feel myself shutter
I stepped inside of you
and watched your storm
infuse against the Heaven's
of your stained glass eyes
right as the straps of your dress
fell beneath your shoulders
did I feel myself shutter
summultima
uma
Forum Posts: 1378
uma
Dangerous Mind
34
Joined 3rd Feb 2012Forum Posts: 1378
Lovely entries!! Thot of extending the comp. with so less posts, but got myself running away unreturning at that tym, srry poets:(
Congratz to all who scribed out best-n-short shots!
Some pieces like Ceejay's, "For Kathy", JJJayJr.s “Words of Love”, geekslutnerdgirl’s “rendered by your side”, Devlin’s,"eyes, windows, soul” made a thick traverse hard to forget, but those which bowled me over were Craic’s “Spaced out”, Kate’s “Fantasia” & Feddler’s “blue-book”
Tq all agn, n wud love to read u more in such comps. Cheerz
Congratz to all who scribed out best-n-short shots!
Some pieces like Ceejay's, "For Kathy", JJJayJr.s “Words of Love”, geekslutnerdgirl’s “rendered by your side”, Devlin’s,"eyes, windows, soul” made a thick traverse hard to forget, but those which bowled me over were Craic’s “Spaced out”, Kate’s “Fantasia” & Feddler’s “blue-book”
Tq all agn, n wud love to read u more in such comps. Cheerz
lepperochan
CraicDealer
Forum Posts: 14592
CraicDealer
Guardian of Shadows
67
Joined 1st Apr 2011Forum Posts: 14592
Thanks most lots, Uma
Hat tip, Kate n John.
I'd like to dedicate this trophy to sweet baby Jesus.
...you're welcome, sweet baby Jesus !
Hat tip, Kate n John.
I'd like to dedicate this trophy to sweet baby Jesus.
...you're welcome, sweet baby Jesus !
JohnFeddeler
Forum Posts: 325
Tyrant of Words
83
Joined 18th Jan 2013Forum Posts: 325
Thanks for the nod, Uma, thumbs up to Craic & kateA, & all the entries. great comp...
Anonymous
Congrats, CraicD.
UMA, thanks for the shout-out.
Great job everybody; I enjoyed reading all of the entries!
UMA, thanks for the shout-out.
Great job everybody; I enjoyed reading all of the entries!
seekingkate
kateA
Forum Posts: 2081
kateA
Tyrant of Words
28
Joined 20th May 2014 Forum Posts: 2081
thank you...such a lovely surprise...congrats to craic & JF....I feel quite honoured to be amongst these two...just reread all the entries...such an impressive bunch...love your trophy dedication craic...😊