Poetry competition CLOSED 1st April 2015 7:21am
WINNER
PsychicApocalypse (Darker Half)
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RUNNERS-UP: Kou_Indigo and toniscales

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Vampire

BoFantastic
Thought Provoker
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Suck My Big Bone

suck my big bone
it might break your fangs
what can I say
my big bone is harder than any oak tree
duck duck goose
let me cut loose
and grab a vampire by the hair
throw her across the room
and buck buck boom
beat her with a broom
no more hissing throwing fits
vampire shit out of luck
when I contest
no vampire can handle my big bone
they get bloody mess
I hunt the wicked with vicious apathy
big bone master with big bone nasty

stormiwyndz
Thought Provoker
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I feel a little self conscious after all of that beautiful work, but I'll post mine. What can it hurt?

Dark Angel's Kiss

Angel of the Night,
Come to me in my dreams,
Let me find sweet heaven,
In your illustrious arms,
Obtain my eternal soul,
Though I be ever cursed,
Let me find utter ecstasy,
In your nectar-like burgundy lips,
Steal me from all desolation,
But restore me to life eternal,
Let the blood of the Ancients,
Flow crimson through my veins,
I need your treasured revelation,
Of deep love immortally,
Let me by your side dance,
Across the silver stars and the crystal oceans,
You and I alone forever,
Be my Dark Angel and let me join you into infinity.

Grace
IDryad
Tyrant of Words
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The Vampire Lovers

Within the tombs
there mossy webs
contained the memories
of centuries past
history of vampires
lost within the threads

she loved the true lord
in his cape of black
with choice her will
she wanted life
eternal with her beloved
dark blood turned her so

embrace he her in hunger
of love to preserve
of body to conserve
fly they to the castles
where ancient rites awaited
they wed in bliss as mortals

yet time did past
thousands of years
they left their sanctuary
just to be free
back to the land
they once did live

the hosts declined
to be dined on
and lo they hold up
torches and pitchfork
they cornered the lovers
and a fight ensued

the night was filled
with screams and shouts
but immortals lost
to stakes and garlics
they burnt what was left
and buried it deep

within the mossy tomb
their ashes interred
quiet reigned.

Quill-in-Heart
Tony Pena
Fire of Insight
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Joined 6th Dec 2012
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A  connoisseur's red lips

Fuck Cabernet red
wine as the tonic
of choice to ward
off terminal diseases
of the broken heart.
A long slow suck
with chiseled canine
teeth on the jugular
vein of a virgin
with rose petals
sewn in tongue
and bitten by
the green fairy on
a gossamer sheet
mottled by the blood
of dead lovers,
a far more enticing
entree on the menu
of edible eternity
where the undead
dance with carriers
of spirits infectious
and nutritious for nights
of necrophilic nirvana .

ItalianKOKO
Salvatore Didato
Lost Thinker
Italy
Joined 6th Mar 2015
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It's my first try of rhyming in english...
I hope it's not too horrific

SOUP OF THE DAY
I still remember my first bite
As a creature of the night
When I started my long fight
With thirst and daylight

Since I came out of the ground
Every day is a new round
That starts when sun goes down
Till you, the victim, I have found

You, the fish, that with my hook
In a single blow I took
You, the food, that I, the cook
Follow smell hear and look

I follow your nervous walking
I smell your profuse sweating
I hear your rapid heart beating
I look your fast and short breathing

I will not make run away
You, the soup of the day

toniscales
Lost Girl
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http://www.ironicsans.com/images/louisebrooks.jpg

(Had to picture my favorite silent star, Louise Brooks, for the speaker of the piece.)

Tangerine

for R.

"She is all they claim
With her eyes of night and lips as bright as flame..."

I walk the streets, my black cloche hat
pulled tightly against my slick,
ebony hair, short as a boy’s
yet cut into points at my ears.

Somewhere a baby cries,
something in me shivers with anguish.

I hate that I must take.
Morbidly sensitive by nature
when they turned me into a Dark One
I thought I’d go mad with the
world’s silent symphonies of pain.

Soft, somber jazz plays in the smoke-lit
club, “Tangerine” perhaps. The music
makes me want to cringe, double up
in sorrow. The beauty is too acute.
Humans in the ignorant happiness
they only can know.

But finally I see him, sense him,
elegant curves of his face.
Dark roguish hair slashed over one eye.

No words need pass between us.
In the alleyway, black as cats,
he shoves me hard against the brick,
madly tearing at fishnet

to get at my dripping my core. Something in
his face and eyes haunt my soul
as he takes me hard and fierce;
he’s broken like me, I can taste it on him,
and as he takes me with the violence I like,
I like it because I ache to be punished
for the monster I am...

I whisper so he can't hear me
above the deep slaughter of sex,
I love you, though I don’t know you.
Love me, please.

With each sweet thrust my nails
rake up and down his back,
that’s when I start to sob,
soon he will be mine no more,
though he was never mine to begin with.

He mistakes my tears for pleasure,
and so they are in a way,
no human could know the ecstasies
of the flesh as we can.

His blood sweet in my throat,
his agonizing screams like that of passion,
I know he is dying now,
we are a heaving junction of blood, sweat, tears,
semen, the juices of earthly pleasure yet definitely
of living hell.

I hold him in my arms, weeping softly,
licking bloody tears from his face.
I will learn time and time again
there is no greater hell
than explosive passion softened by death.

All that is beautiful, in the end,
is ephemeral.

DevilsChild
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I really enjoyed everyone's poems ^^.  Congratulations Darker Half!

ItalianKOKO
Salvatore Didato
Lost Thinker
Italy
Joined 6th Mar 2015
Forum Posts: 8

I liked this competition and I enjoyed writing my poem.
Thank you to DevilsChild for organizing the competition.
Congratulations to Darker Half (I already knew she were the winner, as I read her poem).
Congratulations also to Lost Girl and Jessica Jennifer Ashton.

PsychicApocalypse
Darker Half
Dangerous Mind
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Joined 5th Dec 2012
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To be honest, truthfully I'm surprised i won... I loved this competition...
Of course It features my fav fantasy \m/ (^,..,^) \m/

I have a lot of respect to these women..
Lost Girl (toniscales) and Jessica Jennifer Ashton (Kou_Indigo)
And Congratz to you both for runner-ups

It was an honor writing with every one!

Darker.

Grace
IDryad
Tyrant of Words
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Wow...awesome Darker! congratulations:) and Toniscales and dear Jessica!

toniscales
Lost Girl
Fire of Insight
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Joined 16th Dec 2014
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I'm sorry this took so long... A deep thank-you to Darker and Jessica for their extraordinary work. This was a fun comp. and thanks so much to DC for hosting such a wonderfully themed challenge (I can't get enough vampires)!!!

Kou_Indigo
Karam L. Parveen-Ashton
Tyrant of Words
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Joined 15th Sep 2011
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Congratulations to both Darker Half (PsychicApocalypse) and Lost Girl (toniscales) for doing such an amazing job with this contest! Your writings were fantastic, I must say. I am honored to have been picked as a runner-up for this contest too, thanks so much for that. See everyone next contest! :D

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